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I'm kinda afraid of him being another Blessed though 🤔 Hence maybe WW and him will clash at some point
Maybe another blessed? Someone who remembers his past life?
1st - Qi Creation 2nd - External Flow what's the third?
Only betas label people as "Alpha" and "Beta" 😂
I thought people fight for the bottom bunk?
No separation for males and females? 👀
I think the "limiter" might have been adjusted for loopholes like this, like maybe the oath triggers due to thoughts. Thoughts won't hide as codes, hence it will still trigger the backlash.
I'm reminded of "The Beginning After the End"
TL;DR: Desmond is losing compensation in a lot of his negotiations and could be more improved. Hello author. I know that he has a selfishness trait right? I just want to see it more in his behavior, since I found that Desmond's been losing further profits in his negotiations. Take for example, Clementine was able to step by their bet and involved Desmond in the fight for the hand of Diana. He should have said "Give me something or I'll admit defeat" Now in this case, he's losing out profits as well. Katrina tricked him using a fake scroll, and that should call for compensation i.e. Elf's blood. Then now, Katrina broke off the connection, calling for more severe compensation, which I think by Katrina's behavior he should have guessed would be a big deal. Throwing in all the other ingredients missing aside from being guided by the top mercenaries would have been accepted nonetheless. Katrina declines? He can reply "Oh so your body is worth less than what I'm requesting? I'm settling for your body then". That's it for me. Keep up the good work author-san.
Can there please be an Auxiliary Chapter compiling all of them? 🥺