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InsanelyParanoid
InsanelyParanoidAuthor5yr
2019-04-12 20:30

Hello! Author here! Honestly, I don't know what I should write. Since I am author, it's obvious that I would exaggerate a bit :D Well just look at the score ^^ So let's go with some info! English is not my first language, I am sure that's noticeable. I hope that story is at least at the 'readable' level. Then, it's my first time writing a story. You know, I am quite a lazy person, so writing everyday to provide at least 1 chapter a day is hmmm I would say nice training to cure my laziness. Anyway! I hope you guys are enjoying IRTD!

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DaoistCrazy1122
DaoistCrazy1122Lv13

dont drop this I love your work

DaoistCrazy1122
DaoistCrazy1122Lv13

it is the most underrated book on this site I think from what I have seen

MJAgo
MJAgoLv14

Let's blame everything on novel cover 😀

InsanelyParanoid
InsanelyParanoidAuthor

at this point, I am just going to put some hot babe on the cover and fu** it ;)

MJAgo:Let's blame everything on novel cover 😀
ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6

This my mini review, and suggestion, ignore if you don't like it. As you must have noticed many many comments on the MC. How is a Pus**y and so on. I agree with that, The best comment I saw was"This MC does not match the story". It's not about him not having a harem (chapter 22 where i stopped) its about the fact that it seems like he is not against it but more like he is afraid to act on it, which makes him look pathetic. Look, your reasons don't really matter, what you should understand is that reading this is FRUSTRATING, every chapter he acts that way is annoying to read. Saying that "it gets better in future chapters" is a bad thing. If the first 20,30, or 50 chapters are frustrating to read then the novel is not good. I really like this novel, the story (even if it is a bit similar to others, like most novels today are), the grammar is good enough if not perfect but the MC, by far the worst aspect of this novel and is the ONLY reason that at chapter 22 I will not be reading further and if the novel was not good overall I would not bother reviewing or commenting. We don't need some alpha male hitting on every women he sees, we need a competent MC with conviction -if he wants to grow strong to protect someone he will do whats needed, this MC avoids the best way to grow strong out of fear-. To summaries This MCs personality does not fit this novel. I hope this helps, good luck.

InsanelyParanoid
InsanelyParanoidAuthor

Thanks for your time

ErozothDraeor:This my mini review, and suggestion, ignore if you don't like it. As you must have noticed many many comments on the MC. How is a Pus**y and so on. I agree with that, The best comment I saw was"This MC does not match the story". It's not about him not having a harem (chapter 22 where i stopped) its about the fact that it seems like he is not against it but more like he is afraid to act on it, which makes him look pathetic. Look, your reasons don't really matter, what you should understand is that reading this is FRUSTRATING, every chapter he acts that way is annoying to read. Saying that "it gets better in future chapters" is a bad thing. If the first 20,30, or 50 chapters are frustrating to read then the novel is not good. I really like this novel, the story (even if it is a bit similar to others, like most novels today are), the grammar is good enough if not perfect but the MC, by far the worst aspect of this novel and is the ONLY reason that at chapter 22 I will not be reading further and if the novel was not good overall I would not bother reviewing or commenting. We don't need some alpha male hitting on every women he sees, we need a competent MC with conviction -if he wants to grow strong to protect someone he will do whats needed, this MC avoids the best way to grow strong out of fear-. To summaries This MCs personality does not fit this novel. I hope this helps, good luck.
MateusGF
MateusGFLv15

I'm going to first start this saying sorry for my previous review. When I first read your novel up to 50+ chapters, I was really frustrated about the slow progress and that the MC as other have commented before me was kinda lame (considering he was a sex god, and that most books on this genre really doesn't last for many chapters as they finish or are dropped early around 100 or less chapters, so I was kinda hoping for something more fast paced in this regard). But I MUST admit that I was wrong about you man. I know that my opinion must not mean much to you since I'm not a writer and don't know your difficulties at the beginning, but I just wanted to come here and say, you've made TREMENDOUS progress man, and now I really hope you go far and don't get down about ****ty reviews like my first one. Your writing has really gone a notch further than many here and I think that's something due to you charisma and acceptance about assholes like me on your beginning. Hope you continue this story, and that It goes further to other ones that I'm going to be anxious to read. Take my spirit stones(now coins or whatever, ) and hope to support you from now on! Tl:dr - i was a dumbass at first and hope you continue some awesome work! Sorry bro!

InsanelyParanoid
InsanelyParanoidAuthor

Back then, I posted one more chapter when you told me that IRTD is ****ty novel. It hurt, but I myself know I am not good writer, so I just go forward. That's it. But it was funny for me when you were in top fans, so I went out and asked :D

MateusGF:I'm going to first start this saying sorry for my previous review. When I first read your novel up to 50+ chapters, I was really frustrated about the slow progress and that the MC as other have commented before me was kinda lame (considering he was a sex god, and that most books on this genre really doesn't last for many chapters as they finish or are dropped early around 100 or less chapters, so I was kinda hoping for something more fast paced in this regard). But I MUST admit that I was wrong about you man. I know that my opinion must not mean much to you since I'm not a writer and don't know your difficulties at the beginning, but I just wanted to come here and say, you've made TREMENDOUS progress man, and now I really hope you go far and don't get down about ****ty reviews like my first one. Your writing has really gone a notch further than many here and I think that's something due to you charisma and acceptance about assholes like me on your beginning. Hope you continue this story, and that It goes further to other ones that I'm going to be anxious to read. Take my spirit stones(now coins or whatever, ) and hope to support you from now on! Tl:dr - i was a dumbass at first and hope you continue some awesome work! Sorry bro!
MD_Arafat_Alam
MD_Arafat_AlamLv4

But first 50 chapter is pretty boring Does story get better???

DaoistCrazy1122:it is the most underrated book on this site I think from what I have seen
Keisar
KeisarLv13

I read in a review that there is NTR at one point is that true?

InsanelyParanoid
InsanelyParanoidAuthor

There is one scene with two harem members licking each other behind MC back because one of them was too horny due to sex god's divine energy coursing through her body. MC didn't do her because X reasons and she had to somehow vent out this energy. I had too much drama over it so let's end it here.

Keisar:I read in a review that there is NTR at one point is that true?
Keisar
KeisarLv13

Ok thank you.

InsanelyParanoid:There is one scene with two harem members licking each other behind MC back because one of them was too horny due to sex god's divine energy coursing through her body. MC didn't do her because X reasons and she had to somehow vent out this energy. I had too much drama over it so let's end it here.
DaoistCrazy1122
DaoistCrazy1122Lv13

If you find the first 50 chapters boring it just might not be for you it is hard for me to remember because I dropped this book because I lost intrest in it

MD_Arafat_Alam:But first 50 chapter is pretty boring Does story get better???
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