Immortality? Nah, I choose to marry instead!

I lost count of how many weeks I had been searching for an interesting story to read. However, after reading the synopsis, I decided to give it a try and the story didn't disappoint me. If you're just like me that keeps searching for new things to read, try reading this. Maybe you'll experience what I did. I'll tell you what I experience after reading this story "EXCITEMENT"

This is the third book that I am writing after gaining lots of writing experience from my first two popular books. Join me as I tell you this interesting story, a fantasy which will leave you feel excited and awed. Feel free to ask any question here~

Writing Quality: The overall writing quality is good, but there are some errors and incomplete words that can be spotted. (4 stars) Story Development: The story has a slow pace and is quite boring. In the first 20 chapters, there is no fighting, only talking and romance. It would be better to classify this novel as "slice of life." (3 stars) Character Design: The main character has a likable personality, and I also enjoy his wife's interactions with him. However, some characters feel bland and lack depth. (4 stars) World Background: The author doesn't provide enough details about the world. The descriptions are limited to generic terms like "cave" and "(Mc Name) House," making it difficult to fully imagine the setting. (3 stars) Updating Stability: The author wrote a chapter mentioning that the novel is free, which shows dedication and hard work. This deserves a 5-star rating. (5 stars) Evaluation: The story is decent, but it becomes boring due to the lack of action. It feels more like a slice-of-life romance than an engaging plot. However, I won't drop the novel because of this. Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes writing this review, so please don't remove it, even if it doesn't align with your preferences. I enjoy your other novel, particularly "Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers." Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing it.

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hehe boi new book from you , i will definitely read it

Chapter 24 is end for me. I cringe at plot. I'm out. It was fun, but this twist is too predictable and kill all my expectations. Good luck :)

Mc : (Reincarnated in a cultivation world) What should I do..? Joined a cultivation sect Tries cultivating for 1-3 years Stuck at a 3rd qi-refining Gets laughed at Mc : Bro being a cultivator sucks you can't wear Gucci and you always need to wear plain clothes And bro you can't also Have Se* This sucks 😞... Leaves the sect Starts to have a family... THE END... LOL if you read this youve been Rick rolled

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Hey Author, when's the next chapter? Or will this be uncompleted?

the story is interesting and a bit unique but chapter are posted to rarely

Great Novel. Ever since i read "Tales of the Reincarnated Lord", I've always wanted to read another work like this where mc raises a family and has children. Author has no problem having a big Harem but try to work on each heroine at a time, so as not to rain women on the mc, without even gaining the reader's empathy, even if you put a lot of women, try to keep something around 15, so as not to become very large and even difficult for us readers to remember who is who. The only part that I didn't like was the issue of existing floors, it would be better if the mc had a fixed territory to establish the family and maybe even build your forces whether it's a kingdom or a sect.

Xenia hahaha well written character, do not drop pls................[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Author-san, this novel is great. It made me addicted just after reading the first chapter, and without knowing I finished reading all the chapters. As a senior, please impart your word of wisdom to this humble and poor fellow Author. 🥺🙇🥰

I haven't been able to find an interesting novel to read for a while. The novel looks interesting enough. I hope you are a fast and consistent writer. I'm looking forward to your updates.

So far so good after all this book and your other one (stealing the protagonists yandere lovers) are two of my favorites

very good story, only that I hope you give cultivation aspect a little more importance(this is just personal prefrence so you can ignore it also). nothing more to say as its only 17 chapters so there is not much world buildings, everything else is good so far.👍

Awesome. I finally found a new novel that makes me excited. I hope the system shop has something to help his first wife become more beautiful and increase her talent so she can cultivate. Also can the author please limit the number of wives he will have. I mean, having too many wives ain't too good either and it will be kinda frustrating for character development. Anyway all the best

This is the first novel in this genre that i read. And I loved it. Author is a excellent writer. interaction between Mc and his family is Good and not forced.

I like the story development, the world is basic cultivation world, and not many chapters to decide if I like the characters or not but the MC seems pretty cool. The first wife is magnifique and the other love interests seem not too bad. Author just saying I hate annoying girls so if I drop it it's probably a personal preferences not because you did anything wrong. Authors on webnovel love to add annoying women that make 0 sense lol.

If you have checked any other work of this author, you would know this is yet another amazing work! Give it a shot, I am sure you will not regret reading it! The writing quality is top-notch, and the story makes you want to keep turning the pages!