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Novel Reader : Self Proclaim 1 star Novel/Fanfic Inspector 4 - 5 ✰ - Good grammar, Nice Story, Nice Plot, Fun, Bearable grammar, Bearable story 2 - 3 ✰ - Kinda Bad Grammar, Kinda Bad Story 1 ✰ - ☠

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    FandomExplorer_2nd4 months ago
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    Carne village lol 😆😋 it can mean Meat Village in English depending on the language

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    FandomExplorer_2nd5 months ago
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    Apple 🍎 That's all I could say other than the author slow updates but I do think the author could just... How could I say this maybe 🤔 fix the viewer's comments?, Nah that sounds wrong maybe the right word is improve it cause it feels dry... Like the Sahara desert overall decent good grammar and the character act their personality good not like an ooc

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    FandomExplorer_2nd5 months ago
    respondió a Monotone_Bear

    Your weird you always comment on other person's comment .w., But I guess that don't really matter? But I do agree though on some of your 'Recomendation'.

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    FandomExplorer_2nd6 months ago
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    Hmm... This makes me think if the MC picks the first option, I would have think he would either investigate the kamakura project and maybe make the reserve course student content in the school?.. I don't really know there is a LOT of ways the MC could prevent the "The Biggest, Most Awful, Most Tragic Event in Human History." being removing Junko Enoshima would be the obvious one... But from what going from the story I think Junko is a potential GF? Dunno keep it going mah guy

  • FandomExplorer_2nd
    FandomExplorer_2nd6 months ago
    respondió a Monotone_Bear

    Yoo... That's crazy, I just listened to that song before reading this chapter..And I must say the instrumental is good and their language in Brazil as they sing it is good, It's my first time hearing a Brazilian song and bruh it was about The coffin of Andy and Leyley so... I guess not many people will like it or understand it cause some people don't know the game is about.

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    FandomExplorer_2nd6 months ago
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    Wise man one said.. If one thing end in a failure adapt, overcome and improve, May your writing skill get better and create high quality story.

  • FandomExplorer_2nd
    FandomExplorer_2nd6 months ago
    respondió a Kukukuku

    Nicely done on how you cooked that alpha wolf wannabe guy the fact that he didn't ignore what your pointing at chapter 27 means that is his reason why he called mc a cuck... Like damn, Did he not have a loving father?, Any normal father would comfort their sons and daughters... I'm getting tired at those people like I get that he hated beta or cuck (I don't know why this even exist maybe some people just thought these lable affect reality or something like... I have enough of these people they need to stop reading too much alpha thing stuff...)

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  • FandomExplorer_2nd
    FandomExplorer_2nd7 months ago
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    The hell... That gives me nostalgia... Like man it's like the OG food wars lol 😂

  • FandomExplorer_2nd
    FandomExplorer_2nd7 months ago
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    Know this I will send 3 power stone everyday as a support author.