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Jaiden_Aliya
Jaiden_AliyaLv31yr
2023-03-31 18:29

I like the story development, the world is basic cultivation world, and not many chapters to decide if I like the characters or not but the MC seems pretty cool. The first wife is magnifique and the other love interests seem not too bad. Author just saying I hate annoying girls so if I drop it it's probably a personal preferences not because you did anything wrong. Authors on webnovel love to add annoying women that make 0 sense lol.

Immortality? Nah, I choose to marry instead!

Sheizzcoldasice
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MK_Infinity
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I lost count of how many weeks I had been searching for an interesting story to read. However, after reading the synopsis, I decided to give it a try and the story didn't disappoint me. If you're just like me that keeps searching for new things to read, try reading this. Maybe you'll experience what I did. I'll tell you what I experience after reading this story "EXCITEMENT"

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Sheizzcoldasice
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This is the third book that I am writing after gaining lots of writing experience from my first two popular books. Join me as I tell you this interesting story, a fantasy which will leave you feel excited and awed. Feel free to ask any question here~

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DaoistzEswsL
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the ending better not be like the last one

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GreedyHuman
GreedyHumanLv11

Writing Quality: The overall writing quality is good, but there are some errors and incomplete words that can be spotted. (4 stars) Story Development: The story has a slow pace and is quite boring. In the first 20 chapters, there is no fighting, only talking and romance. It would be better to classify this novel as "slice of life." (3 stars) Character Design: The main character has a likable personality, and I also enjoy his wife's interactions with him. However, some characters feel bland and lack depth. (4 stars) World Background: The author doesn't provide enough details about the world. The descriptions are limited to generic terms like "cave" and "(Mc Name) House," making it difficult to fully imagine the setting. (3 stars) Updating Stability: The author wrote a chapter mentioning that the novel is free, which shows dedication and hard work. This deserves a 5-star rating. (5 stars) Evaluation: The story is decent, but it becomes boring due to the lack of action. It feels more like a slice-of-life romance than an engaging plot. However, I won't drop the novel because of this. Note to the author: I spent 15 minutes writing this review, so please don't remove it, even if it doesn't align with your preferences. I enjoy your other novel, particularly "Stealing the Protagonist's Yandere Lovers." Keep up the good work, and I hope you continue writing it.

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YoungOldMan
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Reveal spoiler

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Blank_paper
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hehe boi new book from you , i will definitely read it

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Maksim_Yushko
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Chapter 24 is end for me. I cringe at plot. I'm out. It was fun, but this twist is too predictable and kill all my expectations. Good luck :)

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FandomExplorer_2nd
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Mc : (Reincarnated in a cultivation world) What should I do..? Joined a cultivation sect Tries cultivating for 1-3 years Stuck at a 3rd qi-refining Gets laughed at Mc : Bro being a cultivator sucks you can't wear Gucci and you always need to wear plain clothes And bro you can't also Have Se* This sucks 😞... Leaves the sect Starts to have a family... THE END... LOL if you read this youve been Rick rolled

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Lord_Aizen_Lvl9999
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UPDATE!UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE

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Ironrooster36
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Hey Author, when's the next chapter? Or will this be uncompleted?

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