I became a legion lich

1 chapter in and i couldn't force myself to read more...the writing quality is horrendous enough to cause a headache. I'm aware that english isn't the author's native language, but even a cursory skimming at chapter 1 will reveal atleast 50+ mistakes...and its not just grammatical mistakes, there are even mistakes for something as basic as gender mentions: where the MC is referred by "her" instead of "his" a lot of times in just the first chapter...Still this is not the worst english writing i've read, but its almost reaching the worse ones...And about the "English is not my 1st language" excuse, although i've seen countless authors use that i still don't understand how that logic works...You're writing on an english platform, so you should atlest learn basic English grammar and writing skills before you decide to post a half-as*ed story and not use more advanced and difficult words to make is easier on yourself...Thats all.🤦

Now quick heads up not until about chapter 50 or 51 does the main character get into the hole necromancy thing but the story build up is worth it and I'm really enjoying what the authors done so far and there is some mess ups with the he/her while the characters are speaker but other than that pretty good novel.

Mandatory 5 star review. It's my first time writing a story and I hope you like it. Please share with friends if you like it. ;););););););)

8 chapters in and haven’t been introduced to the necromancy and or undead. I understand we need to care about the parents but they are going to die so you shouldn’ waste so much time on them. Also the grammer is pretty mediocre at times. Non the less I’ interested in seeing where this is token.

Yeah the writting quality was not the best, but I liked it. While it did irritate me how often you messed up the he and her which really is annoying, but yolo. 20 chapters in and I like it. I recomend you get Grammerly to help.

Dropped because of too many grammar mistakes. Every other sentence the pronouns get messed up. Apparently MC’s mom married my dad.

It is an excellent book for anyone who likes ''EVIL MC''. Don't hesitate because of the low rating, the story is solid, the problem for some is the spelling errors, but it doesn't justify such a low rating for such a good novel.

It is a very well-crafted book, explaining how the protagonist became corrupted to the point of becoming an undead. I'm really looking forward to hearing about the future of our MC.

good goooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooood

One of the best necromancer stories I've ever read! May the evil protagonists reign forever! Congratulations to the author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [img=recommend]

this is so good i have been reading since chapter 8 or 9 but it shows what we need to know how or why something or someone is doing and the mc sticks to his rules he does not care you a lil girl dead grandma dead cute girl dead some random man dead slave girl dead all is going to die by his hands

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Honestly I’ve loved what I’ve read so far and as long as the Quality stays the same or at least doesn’t get that much worse I won’t stop reading it I’ve been looking for something with this concept for a while that’s good enough for me to want to read it long term I made this review at chapter 198

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it's really good. the author is making the Mc story more detailed so we don't just get oh hey look I'm born undead let's kill them all. I like it. so around after 50 chapters you'll to it. there are some grammar mistakes like him her he she but it's easily fixable and not as exaggerated as people are saying on here. instead of what they are saying "which", it's fine we all know what they mean. it's not nearly as bad as monster integration 🤣. it's pretty good so far I'm looking forward to seeing more. I'm going to just do fast passes for now to unlock I don't fully know if it'd worth the commitment to pay yet. but you do get pretty far without fast passes or coins I think almost to 70-80? I love how that was done. everything else in the novel is pretty well written besides what's mentioned above. their is a couple time skips but nothing worth mentioning. and that's about it. I'd recommend one to read.

the grammer is horrible author keeps mixing up he with your it was funny the first two times but I just kept happening. Scenes are dragged on honestly the only saving grace is the world buliding

I really like this book, it is one of the best undead legion stores around.

Top class novel avoids that useless troupe of chance encounter with women to form romance and harem , sensible mc not just useless chance encounters, but author Nim when are you dropping new chapter or have you dropped the novel