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Lucien121

Lucien121

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2020-08-03 Se unióUnited States
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213h
    Comentado por

    I think this is an example of shooting the gun a bit too soon

    Ch 181 Chapter 168: A Special Way of Traveling
    This Lich Requests More Remuneration
    Fantasía · Nine Lives Fat Cat
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien12111h
    Comentado por
    "Tsk tsk, a couple, huh? I'm envious. My wife and I were also as sweet as you when we were young, traveling everywhere. Too bad, until my knee took an arrow, I could only become an innkeeper."
    Magic Chronicles : Fallen Race
    Fantasía · Hail_The_loli
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien12122d
    Comentado por

    Zeus is Greek god right...oden is norse🤣

    Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
    The Editor's POV
    Fantasía · CloverNine
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1212mth
    Comentado por

    I really need to start reading the fine print on things

    Ch 126 Chapter 126: Demon King? Elf King!
    Magic Chronicles : Fallen Race
    Fantasía · Hail_The_loli
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1212mth
    Comentado por

    🤣 if they got a gun bring a bigger one or multiple bigger ones

    As an Easterner, Reji also inherited the "fear of insufficient firepower" tradition. So, to put it bluntly, the reason he gave the Sorcery Demons so much power and space was to vigorously engage in scientific research.
    Magic Chronicles : Fallen Race
    Fantasía · Hail_The_loli
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1212mth
    Comentado por

    lol didn't read the chapter title oh well

    Ch 179 Changes in the clan
    Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity
    Fantasía · primodial
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1212mth
    respondió a primodial

    it's ok lol I'm not impatient ik webnovel messes up alot

    Ch 175 Test
    Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity
    Fantasía · primodial
    detail
  • Lucien121
    Lucien1212mth
    respondió a primodial

    it's not 🤣

    Ch 175 Test
    Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity
    Fantasía · primodial
    detail
  • Lucien121
    Lucien1212mth
    respondió a primodial

    all good lol

    Ch 175 Test
    Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity
    Fantasía · primodial
    detail
  • Lucien121
    Lucien1212mth
    Comentado por

    the first half of the chapter is the same As the second half

    Ch 175 Test
    Malevolent Warlock: Sin Of Eternity
    Fantasía · primodial
    detail
  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    respondió a LamenThief

    no it's just the mother one gets me to much man. I see a lot of potential in the story line itself but the adding of the mother was just kinda off putting man. I hope your story does well

    Reincarnated in the Astral World
    Fantasía · LamenThief
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    Publicado por

    just to weird for me I'm not into mommy love it just got to cringe I'm sorry. I couldn't continue. it could've been good but without the mommy thing. this story has no bright future in it I believe .

    Reincarnated in the Astral World
    Fantasía · LamenThief
    detail
  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    Comentado por

    i love this novel so far hopefully it updates soon

    Ch 29 Classroom of Oddities
    Reborn King Joins The Academy
    Fantasía · FindingNessie
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    respondió a Lucien121

    book not boom

    Lucifer system: Becoming the Devil in an Apocalypse
    Fantasía · SoulSnatcher
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    Publicado por

    honest review here. so the story moves way to fast that you can't keep up with it at times and have to reread certain parts to understand a little bit of it. we barely have any background. writing quality is ok, the story line could be something if it was fleashed out more. but over all what brings this book to its very knees is its story progressen, how fast paced and how much plot armour it has. it's like James throw a rock in anger and broke a window and killed someone, but the guy was a serial killer and another guy showed up and said it was suicide and everyone believed him, then his mother came to kill him bc she didn't like him ect he killed her puppy. it's like that. the way the story is, it is just to fast paced to much going on with not a spectacular beginning. it could be good. if the setting was more detailed and thought out. if it wasn't so rushed, if they actually made a power scale. there is not one in here. I read this for free btw on my daily reads. I suffered over 50 chapters. it was ok for awhile a bit of a rush in the beginning isn't so bad it kills everything for the future sometimes so I stuck with it. but the way this has progressed was what killed it. all in all its not a bad idea, just poor execution of it. maybe need to flesh out the story more on a story board or note boom come back to it and reboot the book from scratch.

    Lucifer system: Becoming the Devil in an Apocalypse
    Fantasía · SoulSnatcher
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    respondió a Primordial_Devour

    alright thank you🤘

    Ch 1 Enchanted Clothes
    Primordial Devourer System
    Fantasía · Primordial_Devour
    detail
  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    respondió a Drip

    alright lol good luck on demon system man thank you for the reading as it was if you ever restart it just lay me a comment ill read it🤣🤘

    Ch 68 Destined Death
    Vampire Reborn
    Fantasía · Drip
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    Comentado por

    did this get dropped?

    Ch 1 Enchanted Clothes
    Primordial Devourer System
    Fantasía · Primordial_Devour
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    Comentado por
    Feeling perplexed but left with no other option, he wasted no time dashing toward the reckless child who finally turned toward the oncoming truck but instead of trying to move away from it, he froze in fear, unaware of what he should do next.
    Primordial Devourer System
    Fantasía · Primordial_Devour
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  • Lucien121
    Lucien1213mth
    respondió a Katanexy

    ah gotcha lol I like the novel so far my gf mad bf i spent 20 bucks on coins🤣🤣

    Lilith is the First Primordial Human, someone created from Adam's rib, the First Human Progenitor. In the case of this Lilith, many questions were questionable: how did she become a demon? How did she live in the human world as a goddess? Was she a goddess?
    My Blood Legacy: Reincarnated as a Vampire
    Fantasía · Katanexy
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