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Gaming Sword Magician

Autor: Lazy_leon
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The sky is the chessboard, stars are its pieces, the kings duke it out in the afterlife while a young mortal metamorphoses into a Deva! The human race is at war with the vicious Abbadon shaman and savages but an era of peace ensured after a grand battle. In a fantasy world, where the awakening of Class weapons is done through a magical ceremony, a snowy-haired boy with the bloodline of the divine battle king is abandoned on the outskirts of the Water Kingdom. Whittaker is a child of mysterious origin, who awakened a system along with two class weapons during the awakening ceremony. He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day, a mysterious spirit slumbering inside the pendent of the night–a treasure of his unknown parents–awakened. Ever since that day, he was given missions to find out secrets untold. _ Check out my other Novel: Scion of time Gaming System (R-18, FACE SLAPPING! HIGH-TECH!)] Cover rights belong to the artist only. If you want me to take it down just say it in the comment or message me at discord: Lazy_leon#8545 and I will take it down.

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Volumen 1 :Book 1: Tales of the Awakened Continent
Volumen 2 :Book 2: Tales of Royal Frost Fall Academy
Volumen 3 :Book 3: Tales of Conquering the Palace Atop Heaven-Reaching Mountain
Volumen 4 :Book 4: Tales of Bloodline Awakening.
Volumen 5 :Book 5: Tales of Inscription & Formation
Volumen 6 :Book 6: Tales of Shadow
Volumen 7 :Book 7: Tales of Monster tower
Volumen 8 :Book 8: Tales of Contestants Killers & Elixir Master
Volumen 9 :Book 9: Goodbye, Palace in the skies!
Volumen 10 :Book 10: Tales of a prodigy

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Southpaw97
Southpaw97Lv15

OK this is an actual review. I started this novel because like you I thought since it said 5 stars and there a bunch of 5 stars ratings but that is NOT the case. I got to chapter 165 and this is toxic dumpster fire garbage. Why go so far as 165 you say? Well naively I tried to stick it out but it was just so bad. Characters are about as cliche and flat as you can imagine. MC especially. There's no struggle, no real development because everything is handed to him on a silver platter. Even supposed impossible trials are magically achieved because he "happened" to somehow exploit some loophole. And if the Main Character is bad, the supporting characters are worse. They are just there to make the MC look good and power of friendship. No real value. There also just no clear plot line. So much gets introduced and put aside. Like for the Main character is trying to climb a tower dungeon while also being a first year at a school while also being apart of some secret organization then out of nowhere he's attacked from different world from outer space?!? (yes this actually happened). Just makes no sense. The writing quality is also clearly subpar. So many grammer and spelling mistakes it's comical. While I don't mean to be rude but this is no doubt machine translated at best with no revision effort afterward. Updates was a positive. Very Consistent. But thats it. Background is promising but not fleshed out very well or at all really. Many countries and places but no attempt to talk about them or make then anything more then stating "this town in this country". Any way long story short, this is so trash, it's not even good enough to be guilty pleasure trash. Have some standards.

The_cursed_one
The_cursed_oneLv15

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