that's a new definition of keeping it in the family 😂

it is a very good start I like it so far this is going to turn out to be a very good dragon ball fanfic so keep up the good work I hope you read more

it's possible are you related Brian Lee dawson

Aoi ,Rin ,Yuna, Riko , Mio ,Rei ,yuzuki ,mei

this is very good I'm enjoying it very much so far keep up the good work

Keep up the good work and don't get down there are very few one punch man manga that are good this is one of the best so far

you should make him fuse his body in lightning for more power reflexes reaction time and faster though and brain power to help with the side affect of his transformation

this is very good I'm enjoying it

ok well I hope your move goes well

this is an awesome I hope you will continue writing this it's very well written very detailed and enjoyable so please continue writing this[img=recommend][img=update]

this is absolutely amazing it's perfection

please continue writing this it is amazing

im the only one in the comments that has over 1100 hours of reading that I've seen so far I feel like I need to get out more

wait he can't afford 30000DP but he had 127k DP in the last chapter what happened

thank you for so many chapters this is an amazing story I hope you continue it for a long time you can't find good Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic on here so this is awesome I love your writing keep up the amazing work

this is already starting off amazing I get into the story I want to read more I would love to have a mass release of this keep up the amazing writing

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man your writing is absolutely amazing it's some of the best fanfic I have read on webnovel your an absolute legend keep up the great work amazing

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