Brandon_Dawson1

that's a new definition of keeping it in the family 😂

it is a very good start I like it so far this is going to turn out to be a very good dragon ball fanfic so keep up the good work I hope you read more

it's possible are you related Brian Lee dawson

Aoi ,Rin ,Yuna, Riko , Mio ,Rei ,yuzuki ,mei

this is very good I'm enjoying it very much so far keep up the good work

Keep up the good work and don't get down there are very few one punch man manga that are good this is one of the best so far

you should make him fuse his body in lightning for more power reflexes reaction time and faster though and brain power to help with the side affect of his transformation

this is very good I'm enjoying it

ok well I hope your move goes well

this is an awesome I hope you will continue writing this it's very well written very detailed and enjoyable so please continue writing this[img=recommend][img=update]