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ade457656Lv153yr
2021-06-23 06:10

i would love to say great ending but it costs too much to just end in the middle of the book as a finished story if I'd have known i wouldn't have wasted my fp and credits on a fraction of a finished book good story bad writer for doing half a job even if its for pleasure its stiil paying you for premium

Gaming Sword Magician

Lazy_leon
4.7
252 Chs

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DriftingDragon
DriftingDragonLv13

Welp…. i feel for ya…. Web$ovel is a rip-off and scam in many ways. A lot of Novels arent even proofread and they expect you to spend your hard earned money on it. Some stop in the middle like this one. Thats why i normally look up books on Amazon kindle or just find free translated books on novelupdates.

3yr
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Nathian_Burghduff
Nathian_BurghduffLv10

Honestly I am loving the book so far, it has consistent updates, as well as, good character development. I recommend this book for everyone to reaD

4yr

Daist_with_one_scr
Daist_with_one_scrLv2

Writing this review with 41 ch read so take that into account. Where you ever frustated, that main character is waiting for power up at least 20 ch or more? Well based on what i read so far, this novel for you. I already fall in love with the whole power system, main character and even some side characters(which is very rare). I can´t say this confidently but so far, this is at the top when you are looking for tags as: game system, magic, frindship or bit of comedy :)

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Taoist_Azure_Sword
Taoist_Azure_SwordLv4

0-0 Listen to me......this novel is too good. >< Bro this novel makes you want to spend fast pass or coins. -_- Other novels make me sometimes yawn or go on other apps while I'm reading. This novel is was so good that I wasted more than one hundred fast passes and create 5 more accounts to get 15 faster passes daily. WHYYYYY DID THE AUTHOR MAKE THIS A PREMIUM NOVEL> I hate/love the author. Also, the author should post the original photo of the MC. Also, the author shouldn't make this a harem novel. I don't want to see the pure, innocent, naive child be a Casanova. (0)_(0)

3yr
Leon_Dragneel
Leon_DragneelLv2

Take it all. All my power stones are reserved for you. Even if it's only one. Author, you have my heart, my souls my eyes, and my everything~everything~ You are my everything. Hashtag, I am straight.

4yr
Lazy_leon
Lazy_leonAuthor

Author supporting his work. In this novel, you will feel how life in a magical academy is. The world will be seen and felt with the eyes of the main protagonist. There are seven human lands, each with their unique storyline. There is Fighting magical beast, understanding the concept of "worlds", completing "dungeon", fending off the alien invaders, face slapping, and lastly, comprehensive magical " Technology" in the early chapter of this novel.

4yr
Lazy_leon
Lazy_leonAuthor

123 Chapters in and am here to once again self promote myself. To be honest, I must say I am impressed with myself for creating such a masterpiece for no reason whatsoever. Just think of me as a narcassist!

4yr
Southpaw97
Southpaw97Lv15

OK this is an actual review. I started this novel because like you I thought since it said 5 stars and there a bunch of 5 stars ratings but that is NOT the case. I got to chapter 165 and this is toxic dumpster fire garbage. Why go so far as 165 you say? Well naively I tried to stick it out but it was just so bad. Characters are about as cliche and flat as you can imagine. MC especially. There's no struggle, no real development because everything is handed to him on a silver platter. Even supposed impossible trials are magically achieved because he "happened" to somehow exploit some loophole. And if the Main Character is bad, the supporting characters are worse. They are just there to make the MC look good and power of friendship. No real value. There also just no clear plot line. So much gets introduced and put aside. Like for the Main character is trying to climb a tower dungeon while also being a first year at a school while also being apart of some secret organization then out of nowhere he's attacked from different world from outer space?!? (yes this actually happened). Just makes no sense. The writing quality is also clearly subpar. So many grammer and spelling mistakes it's comical. While I don't mean to be rude but this is no doubt machine translated at best with no revision effort afterward. Updates was a positive. Very Consistent. But thats it. Background is promising but not fleshed out very well or at all really. Many countries and places but no attempt to talk about them or make then anything more then stating "this town in this country". Any way long story short, this is so trash, it's not even good enough to be guilty pleasure trash. Have some standards.

3yr
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

One of the best novels on here with a refreshing MC. I adore Whittaker which is why I don’t understand. Author why would you stab us in the heart like this? 🥺😭😭😭

3yr
Xjski
XjskiLv2

Exceeding good novel. The grammar was a refreshing experience for me, so was the plot of the story, less cliche, and the authors has grasped the meaning of the show not tell. I hope you will get what you deserve, a large reader base!

4yr
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