From Mortal to Divinity

This is an impressive work of fiction. To start with it is a jumpchain novel, and the speed of the jumpchains are quite high. I personally love it because the high speed keeps me engaged and entertained. I’ve never been in the middle of a jump and thought “this is dragging too much” which is a real problem in other jumpchains. I’ve read some that will put 50 chapters into one jump or bring characters from one jump to the next meaning extra chapters in between jumps. Most jumpchains do this because it’s comfortable for them to have reoccurring voices and they can’t write with so many new voices every 5-10 chapters. Let’s talk about characterization: the characterization in this novel is fantastic and realistic, while the main character is almost reminiscent of John wick. There is focus to the mc’s actions, he enters a world and everything he does is aimed at completing his objectives and I love it. The writing is fantastic I have no gripes about the quality, grammar and spelling are both top notch. The stability of updating has not left me wanting, it comes quickly and I consume it much quicker. The development of the story is amazing, you really notice every time the main character utilizes something he has learned during a previous jump. I’m looking forward to wherever the author takes this in the next jump and every jump thereafter. The world development is a solid 5, you never forget which world the mc is in and that is a problem I’ve seen in other jumpchain novels where jumps seem to mesh together and you forget where the author has taken you. This novel definitely has my recommendation, if you have trouble with the first few chapters trust me when I say if you can get to the third jump that’s when it really starts to shine and the author locks in their style.

The writing is super fast paced but still enjoyable and deserves a good read .. if only two complain i had about the novel would be 1. some times author gets lazy and writes in a one big ass paragraph 2. even though its fast paced it took me a while to get used to the transition between the worlds..

umm .. I'm confused Maybe the Jumpchain genre is not suitable for me

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Very meh. Nothing bad or good about it. Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash Splish Splash 140 character limit is trash

English is not my native Language Your story is great. Reason 1: As Readers you have seen how the MC becomes not only stronger step by step but his charakter is improfing and learning. Reason 2: The Harem is not that the MC is walking a street and the Girls hop in and **** him. It is a journe and logical reasons that you can only say good work. I am a person that hates Harems for the reason that in 99% it is illogical and pure wishfullfilling with BS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But in this story great. Reason 3: I think you have a plan and have worked with this. Have unique Characters and most important not only the MC's but most other charakters have depth and are not 2D charakter. The only stronger worlds than DC/Marvel would be Cultivation worlds. Then i don't think DB is stronger, i would say ca. identical +- a handfull^^ Would like to see a little Episode where you would KICK (Ultra Mega Giga Strong ;p) issei from DxD Identical to my Post

Definitely one of the better (imo best) jumpchains on here. Even someone like myself who knew almost nothing about many of the worlds the MC has visited I still found myself able to follow the story and not get lost. Everything is well written and explained. I also really like how the harem has been handled in this story. Most harems, nearly all of them infact, that I've read are never really that good, imo. Usually they all seem to suffer the same issues. Mainly turning females characters, regardless of their power or intelligence, into mere tag-ons swooned by the MC's amazing masculinity. Given a brief dedication in the story before quickly being faded off in the background with the other dozen love-struck women that get replaced and forgotten and made irrelevant. Well, none of that here. Despite being a harem it really doesn't have the same "feel" as one, at least to me. Mainly because the MC is not what I would consider a "playboy". He doesn't go out of his way to flirt with all the famous female characters or try to bag them for his collection. Infact for a long time and in most worlds so far he hasn't added anyone new. Because of the way the romance has been handled, even if it isn't a big focus, it actually makes it seem like the MC has a real connection with the few that he does have. Currently at the time of reading this there are four women. Though only two are obviously wives with the other two being more like daughters. Despite this these relationships did not just suddenly "happen" either. There is build up, sometimes going on for years, of friendship or mentorship between the MC and the love interest. This makes the relationship, to me, feel a lot more realistic and stable as opposed to the more typical cases of love-at-first-sight. The women actually have character and aren't just show flowers for the MC to brag about. Of course the action and gradual build-up to power is also great. It can't be easy to balance out having a MC being "really powerful" but still not completely OP to the point of no match. We watch him and by extension his wives gradually grow and become more and more powerful with each world he goes to. Even after he has become a demi-god with divinity and incredibly power magic it still can show that he has more room to grow and he isn't the most powerful - without also making him feel purposely nerfed for sake of drama.

It's a good story and I enjoy it but the author has a prisoner fetish. It's almost like hes a Bethesda writer or something almost every arc involves it.

A good jumpchain, hard to find those nowadays. thank you! ``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````

tbh didn't know why I'd ropped this but now i remember the story is really good until avatar where it felt like you weren't the mc and then bringing azula along is where I dropped it.im going to try and carry on and see if its gets better or not.

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One question is harem, I think it's an excellent story but I haven't finished it, so I don't give it 5 stars, but continue as you are going to crack you happy

I don't even need to explain why this is such a good novel. Just read it, let the man do his job and enjoy. If you're not braindead you will definitely enjoy this without complaining and demanding things from his as he is already really WAY up there when it comes to fanfictions. I wish I could give it more than five stars but the site won't let me.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

This is one of if not the best jump-chain novels I've ever had the pleasure to read, the book gets updated really fast and the MC is actually a smart MC that doesn't make dumba** decisions. The storyline itself is looking to be very promising. The plot that the author has made for the every one of his jumps is also very interesting. I also don't think there is even one mistake in Grammer, that is awesome. I don't think you know, in fact I don't think even I know how many books that could've possibly been very interesting, but I didn't read because I felt like if I actually read it I would lose brain cells, it's sad I know. If there is anything that I think that the book could have been improved on is how in the beginning it just instantly starts the first jump instead of actually explaining how he died and the meeting with the ROB but that doesn't really matter in the long term of things because the book is just THAT good. Good job author 👍 keep it up😁

Great story.Updates are stable.Chapters are not too short :) Concept of the story is fantastic only one thing lacking is romance.As in good strory romance is a must.And in multiverse story one partner is not enought.No one says a million :D few is ok.Good luck.

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I think the character development is getting way better that when you first started.

Really great fan fiction. I really enjoy reading this and I like how there's something for every fandom. I really suggest that you be a little more thorough in your explanations for people who won't understand the specific world your in. I definitely will keep reading.

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