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2020-08-10 16:05

Definitely one of the better (imo best) jumpchains on here. Even someone like myself who knew almost nothing about many of the worlds the MC has visited I still found myself able to follow the story and not get lost. Everything is well written and explained. I also really like how the harem has been handled in this story. Most harems, nearly all of them infact, that I've read are never really that good, imo. Usually they all seem to suffer the same issues. Mainly turning females characters, regardless of their power or intelligence, into mere tag-ons swooned by the MC's amazing masculinity. Given a brief dedication in the story before quickly being faded off in the background with the other dozen love-struck women that get replaced and forgotten and made irrelevant. Well, none of that here. Despite being a harem it really doesn't have the same "feel" as one, at least to me. Mainly because the MC is not what I would consider a "playboy". He doesn't go out of his way to flirt with all the famous female characters or try to bag them for his collection. Infact for a long time and in most worlds so far he hasn't added anyone new. Because of the way the romance has been handled, even if it isn't a big focus, it actually makes it seem like the MC has a real connection with the few that he does have. Currently at the time of reading this there are four women. Though only two are obviously wives with the other two being more like daughters. Despite this these relationships did not just suddenly "happen" either. There is build up, sometimes going on for years, of friendship or mentorship between the MC and the love interest. This makes the relationship, to me, feel a lot more realistic and stable as opposed to the more typical cases of love-at-first-sight. The women actually have character and aren't just show flowers for the MC to brag about. Of course the action and gradual build-up to power is also great. It can't be easy to balance out having a MC being "really powerful" but still not completely OP to the point of no match. We watch him and by extension his wives gradually grow and become more and more powerful with each world he goes to. Even after he has become a demi-god with divinity and incredibly power magic it still can show that he has more room to grow and he isn't the most powerful - without also making him feel purposely nerfed for sake of drama.

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This is an impressive work of fiction. To start with it is a jumpchain novel, and the speed of the jumpchains are quite high. I personally love it because the high speed keeps me engaged and entertained. I’ve never been in the middle of a jump and thought “this is dragging too much” which is a real problem in other jumpchains. I’ve read some that will put 50 chapters into one jump or bring characters from one jump to the next meaning extra chapters in between jumps. Most jumpchains do this because it’s comfortable for them to have reoccurring voices and they can’t write with so many new voices every 5-10 chapters. Let’s talk about characterization: the characterization in this novel is fantastic and realistic, while the main character is almost reminiscent of John wick. There is focus to the mc’s actions, he enters a world and everything he does is aimed at completing his objectives and I love it. The writing is fantastic I have no gripes about the quality, grammar and spelling are both top notch. The stability of updating has not left me wanting, it comes quickly and I consume it much quicker. The development of the story is amazing, you really notice every time the main character utilizes something he has learned during a previous jump. I’m looking forward to wherever the author takes this in the next jump and every jump thereafter. The world development is a solid 5, you never forget which world the mc is in and that is a problem I’ve seen in other jumpchain novels where jumps seem to mesh together and you forget where the author has taken you. This novel definitely has my recommendation, if you have trouble with the first few chapters trust me when I say if you can get to the third jump that’s when it really starts to shine and the author locks in their style.

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