Apocalypse Cheater

90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine. Premise was fine then , 2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this. And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf

there's just way too much infodump,there's whole chapters of him just thinking out his thoughts.

The story is great, but I wanted to ask if you could make an auxiliary chapters of the important ppl and pictures and status of the Mc and plz try to make the status screen and systems notification and when he gets exp and stuff more in order or a different font or in this [] makes it look cleaner [img=recommend][img=update]

I really like the story and I was excited about the main character actually telling someone the truth in the beginning but I can't read it anymore because of the non stop descriptions on everything. It's like you went and found every word you could to describe one single thing every paragraph. Sometimes it gets so bad you take up a whole chapter. If you could dial it down then I think you have something here.

I like it so far and keep it up I think this can turn into a amazing novel. Good good good good good good good good good goood good good Good good good good good good good good good goood good good Good good good good good good good good good goood good good

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the chapter is basically mc inner monolog and the author keep repeating the same paragraph over and over in different ways , everything is overly described , every word he say is accompanied with 4 useless line , it's like when u are at a shool test and u have no idea about what to write so u keep adding meaningless word to stretch the answer but as we all know the results would be mediocre , every chapter is filled with mc plans , emotions about the future and that start grinding your drive to keep reading this book .

Sorry to tell you author but for me your novel is sloppy and I'm tired after only 25 chapters. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm

every sentence is followed by pic related drivel, interestingly enough this filler driver almost never has any mistakes, hmm. so can you stop this author. your grammar and writing quility is at best 1-2 stars and magically this filth is atleast 4. I don't know if you are copy pasting it from somewhere or using ai but its nothing more than padding. so please stop

it was better before the change and only forty some odd chapters free just goes to show some things are to good to be true

heeee author-san this power stone is definitely not a bribe for more chapters but still don't tell anyone okay if not then💀💀🔪🔪😇 goodbye 😇

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1) uses themes and elememts from different books/videogames. Really disgusting how he is butchering their stories to be put in his. Lazy.Unimaginative.

Poison Alert Poison Alert THIS NOVEL IS CHINESE Poison Alert Poison Alert!

keep up the good work ill support the best i can also hopefully he can get strong before the apocalypse i hope the story doesnt end when the apacalypse comes and theres in depth hunting when the apocalypse comes aswell as many many chapters in the future

really enjoyed the one piece template that you use and make a spin out of it

Author will mc’s mother be in his harem?

It is one of the best i read abt being overpowered and really it was really good just waiting when u gonna update more chapters

Well i read all 152 chapters which was enjoyable. I just hope that the girls that will be in his harem aren't all yanderes atleast let's have different kinds of personality. I recommend this novel to all those who likes OP MC and i don't know if it's a fanfic or not because there's many anime element but it's still good. The thing that i don't like is that the Jack of all Trades, it could be good with atleast 3 weapons mastery since it could still be fix since his fighting style changed from his previous life due to his skills, developments and potential plus it could be a waste if he didn't learn from that future sword master in their organization which is lye who likes to spar and i suggest him to learn assassination skill since i know he'll be facing many divine beings or atleast learn concealment to keep his tracks from troublesome things, you never know😂 Anyway i still like this storry. RECOMMENDED❤️

this is dope it as officially entered my top 3 most favourite books an and I have read many books for that I'm sure so please author don't drop it and please for more updates i totally recommend this book for the fans of overpowered protagonist