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Tokyo_Ru
Tokyo_RuLv11yr
2023-09-05 22:42

90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine. Premise was fine then , 2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this. And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf

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Jironimo_Ross
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at this points I'd say 70% are unneeded, just vapid padding.

bitzer
bitzerLv14

Sounds like an AI novel

Grimanddark
GrimanddarkLv1

90% sure this is chatgpt

Jironimo_Ross:at this points I'd say 70% are unneeded, just vapid padding.
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Spirit_Immortal
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check out..... blood Warrior Harem

Grimanddark:90% sure this is chatgpt
Spirit_Immortal
Spirit_ImmortalLv4

check out..... blood Warrior Harem

bitzer:Sounds like an AI novel
Spirit_Immortal
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check out..... blood Warrior Harem

Jironimo_Ross:at this points I'd say 70% are unneeded, just vapid padding.
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