The Flight Diaries

I think it's a pretty nice story to be honest. But, sometimes it can get a bit too long. This first chapter was really funny and fun. To think about it, Villain just had to be a hero

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Really good job on description scenes and the writing! Overall I would just add more world background in the first chapter to really grab more attention. Keep publishing!

Well done! This story was quite interesting so far. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to seeing what else is to come in this amazing story! Can't wait to read more!

I thought it was fabulous it was funny, exciting and just outstanding I loved it. I hope you write more books for me to read in the future I am completely looking forwards to it <3

This story was action packed and it had really great detail about the scenes. I can wait to read more and see what happens next. You did a really great job on the story.

I love how the concept is. The Cat and mouse chase! It really brings back the Ocean's- eleven vibe but at the same time it has a unique take on it.

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First of all I’m so impressed in the beauty of words that the author chosen to describe the background and the flows of the story. I’m literally hooked up by your plot, characters and the setting of your work. I found this book well written and that I enjoyed the author’s writing style.

Man, this funny piece of work. Author, I love how you write such a good story. Nice going through each chapter except some chapters were a little bad. But keep off the good work after all this is just my own viewpoint.

This story has kept me hooked. I have been reading for a week and there hasn't been a chapter so far that i did not like. I love the detailing in each scene. These scenes create a audience holding chapter. I simply love it.

Reading the first chapter, the MC is quite funny. What makes it unique is that the story is magical realism but the author put a tinch of comedy which is good and doesnt make the reader go bore. Keep writing :)

A very good story to get hooked with! Loved the plot! I really loved the way you described the characters! Keep it up Author-nim ❤️ Much support for you!

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I like the plot. It's very unique and the writing is very understandable. I like how the events is taken place. I'm kinda hooked and wanted to know the next part. Thanks for this amazing story.

I'm reading this, and so far am liking it too! Though the conversations can be a bit messy sometimes, and often the actions of the characters don't make any sense, it was pretty fun to read anyways. I'd suggest the author put more thoughts into the actions of his characters, and at the same time, the story development. The story was too rushed for the first chapter, and it wasn't fleshed out well. The comedic part of the chapter was appealing, but sadly, thanks to the lack of details, it was somewhat confusing. Though I'll be reading and looking forward to the upcoming chapters!

I really like the concept of this story. The story itself is amazing and the scenes that the Author provides are well detailed. I can't wait to know more about this story. I can't wait for future chapters.