RicJBS

its average but not excellent

This story has kept me hooked. I have been reading for a week and there hasn't been a chapter so far that i did not like. I love the detailing in each scene. These scenes create a audience holding chapter. I simply love it.

I do honest reviews. Always. So, sorry if you feel bad. I really liked the story. It had a feel that the middle aged century was brought into a modern world story. The struggles of a young girl living a life in the shadows of the males. I love the concept. But i am pretty dissatisfied by the grammar. I, as a new reader and writer, look for the grammar and vocabulary first. Vocabulary was on point but the grammar needs to be edited thoroughly.