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The Battles of Hearts (Naruto)

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Lesen Sie den Roman The Battles of Hearts (Naruto) des Autors The_Mystry, veröffentlicht auf WebNovel.Honestly, I designed Naruto's personality in opposite the Manga/Anime. Although Naruto is my favorite, I wanted to craft a character who experiences betrayal from a loved one and becomes cold hearted,...

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Honestly, I designed Naruto's personality in opposite the Manga/Anime. Although Naruto is my favorite, I wanted to craft a character who experiences betrayal from a loved one and becomes cold hearted, this is the story of Naruto the Military Commando. In my story, his son, Aqua Hoshino, differs from the original Oshi No Ko character. I wasn't fond of how Aqua toyed with Akane and Kana's hearts, so I created him to be the son that Naruto truly deserves. I hope you enjoy my narrative.

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{I just want to clarify that what ever I write is merely for entertainment and nothing that should be taken seriously. Especially for religious people} ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "In the beginning, God created the heavens and the earth". A being who created all things since the beginning of time and the father of all living beings. Yet was this really all there was to it?, Was the creation of both the heavens and the earth really made by God?, was there no creation or existence before the so called 'beginning'? These questions run through most people's mind whether religious or not. Including a young boy who was standing in front of man sitting on a bench near the playground. "Mister!, is that the Bible you are reading?" "Indeed child. Why do you ask?" "I just wanted to know if you believe in God too mister!. So do you?" "Oh I believe he is real. But the real question I want to ask you is do you think God is the father and maker of all creation and existence?" "Yeah!. Mommy says he is, so he must be!. Why mister?, do you not believe he is the father and maker of all creation and existence?" "Hahaha, your a smart one aren't you. But let me tell you a secret..." "What is it mister?" "...God is not the maker of 'all' creation and existence since he is not the true father of humanity" "Huh!?, what do you mean Mister?, it says in the Bible that God created humans?" "Yes. He created humans in his own image, yet what I found strange is that no one has ever seen his true appearance, even when he says he looks like humans. So my question is why does he hide it?, is it because of his unparalleled beauty?, or maybe it's because no being is worthy enough to look at him?. What do you think child?" "I don't know. What about you mister. what do you think?" "It's not what I think, but believe. For I believe that humans were not made in his own image, but were made in the image of-" "Johnathan!. Leave the man alone!, I told you to stay near the park and not wander off!. It's time to go back home!" "But mommy-" "No buts and that's final!. Let's go!. And I apologize sir if my son has done anything to annoy you. "You don't need to worry, It is fine. He was entertaining if anything" "Thank you. But please excuse us sir since we need to leave. Let's go Johnathan!" "Okay mommy. Bye mister!" "Farewell child", the man said as he waved his hand goodbye before looking back up to the sky. "Master... it's time for you to see your creation and for them to know who their real father is", the unknown man muttered before vanishing into thin air without a trace of his presence left.

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the author asked for feedback on what I read and I can say that it was written quite well, since I’ve been reading short stories or ff I’ve already stopped paying attention to grammar, it’s not so important if you’re a new writer, because the most important thing is the plot, here the plot is not bad, but unfortunately for me it is at the level of drama of Chinese short stories, as usual, everyone turned their backs on the main character and abandoned everyone and he decided to return to his former life and again become a withdrawn idiot so that in the end he would get a happy ending, I don’t I say that this is bad, this is the usual cliche with all the things that have to happen, plus the combination of incompatible plot and characters is not bad at all, and it is clear that the author wanted to correctly convey the very essence of the characters and their feelings about their loved ones and how they want to be close to them, but for me it’s not like I could read and wait for continuation, I read everything that was there and because I was drunk and I was bored, and yet I’m here and sharing my opinion, still in the same state, and yet I I believe that there will be people who will like it and they will decide to support the author in his endeavors, and I also wish the author good luck, peace:з

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