[Currently available chapters: 9]
World background: It's probably the most interesting element of the novel, but the one that suffers the most as well... Why? It's just a feeling and a wild guess, to be honest. But while reading, especially in the last few chapters, it was a little forced into the reader, as if reading a wall of text about the world's history but a few intermissions added here and there to not let it looks like an actual wall of text... Anyway, aside from this the author did a good job when he gave out hints as if to remind us that "There is something more...".
Character design: Although this novel is still far from creating an unforgettable character but in those few chapters that I've read, it's noticeable how the author is more into quality than quantity... A choice that I approve of wholeheartedly, to be honest. Regardless, in my opinion, there are still some margins for improvement in the characters' backgrounds... You know, to make a character look "3D", it's necessary for a certain spark to grant them a breath of life...
Update stability: To be honest, I don't have the slightest idea of what to write here... Only time can give us an answer to this.
Story development: For now it's going smoothly... However, it's not bad, after all, it would be quite pointless to make a plot twist when the readers have yet to make some guesses for the future...
Writing quality: Competing to the novels on this platform, it can be definitely graded as above average. I found some surprising vocabulary and it's easy to follow the flow... Nonetheless, it can be improved... Considering that this is his(/her?) first novel, I didn't expect much, but the author surprised me.
Anyway, overall judgment: The MC deserve death for... I won't make spoilers... I will just wait to see your comments in chapter 9... I hope many of you will join my side at that moment.
PS: Even though this is a "swapped review", it doesn't mean that I made up everything, I've my principles (But more importantly, my pride... Why should a deity of writing such as myself lie in a review? That is not my style.) thus I've written purely expressing my true thoughts and giving my opinion to the author... That is all