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Loctovia

Loctovia

Lv15

An earnest reader, a dreamer and now a writer ✍️ Instagram: loctovia_novels Discord: https://discord.gg/Z7tZcQTC

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    Antwortet auf DaoistYP889K

    Thank you so much for the review!

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    Antwortet auf DaoistYP889K

    Thank you for your kind words and the corrections too! Most importantly, I’m glad that you enjoyed the story

    The infamous wedding dress had been completed months before, and like Mirabel's other designs, it was simply amazing! 
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    Antwortet auf Karamin_Alhaki_6287

    Thanks for pointing that out. Think of it as figuratively speaking. It’s as if she had just assumed the role of stepmother in a new environment and there will always be limitations in how she thinks she can act especially considering the household she was coming from. So technically the number of days/ weeks that Shelby has spent in the Thornston household does not really matter.

    She had no place to say anything as it was her first few days in a new home as a contractual bride. No matter how good her treatment was, she was no Robin Hood to try to defend the child that day.
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    Antwortet auf Daoistbygpx2

    Thank you so much for the comment! It means the world to me.

    Ch 57 Park of Secrets … (2)
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    Antwortet auf DaoistYP889K

    That’s spot on! Yep he is 😃. The idea was to estimate the last time Mirabel had s*x. That would be about 9 months if not more before Collin’s birth and then there was also the fact that Collins’s next birthday was approaching…. So, to estimate it would be just about 8 years since she had ….

    Mirabel covered her mouth and blushed furiously. She looked around fervently, wishing that no one had heard Flora. Yes, it had been eight years, if not more, since she had had any sexual engagement with anyone.
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    Antwortet auf S_Love

    That’s one trait I love about her 😍

    Ch 241 Can I really? (2)
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    "It makes me wonder…," the same reporter said again. He never completed his words, and he did not have to because the disdain and disgust he felt for them were the same as almost everyone who was watching them then.
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    Antwortet auf S_Love

    I hope so too but …

    The two ladies sat in a stressed atmosphere in the plush five-star hotel. This was all because of that meeting with what Eliana considered the wrought old man. It had been days since Rose and Eliana met Alex Trimshaw with their proposal, but even after this time had passed, Eliana still felt the revulsion she had felt that night, and a shudder raked through her body.
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    Antwortet auf StylesP
    Ch 166 What are you doing? **
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    Antwortet auf Karamin_Alhaki_6287
    Clara felt the blood drain from her face, and she clenched her hands tightly. No matter how she behaved, Clara loved her daughter like any mother.
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    Antwortet auf Karamin_Alhaki_6287

    Good eye 😅. I’ll make that correction. Thank you 😊

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
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    Antwortet auf Karamin_Alhaki_6287

    My initial reaction after read this comment was to tell you that the later chapters were longer but then I realized that you’ve read quite a bit already so I’m at a loss of words here,😊 . So, I guess I’ll just say, thank you for reading my work and I hope the chapter lengths justify the story for you as you go on…

    Ch 43 It’s You (1)
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    Antwortet auf BarbieFofoe
    "A-re y-ou sure of this, James?" Even though Clara sounded uncertain, her stance had clearly relaxed, meaning that she believed her husband's words.
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    Antwortet auf Daoistv3tWFL
    "A-re y-ou sure of this, James?" Even though Clara sounded uncertain, her stance had clearly relaxed, meaning that she believed her husband's words.
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    "Wisdom has been chasing you, but you have always been faster."
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    I can’t help but laugh alongside with you

    She watched on in uncomfortable silence…. 'I thought we were getting together this week; why is Jorge doing this to me?'
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    Still, she finally concluded that there might be an ongoing event clashing with her time with Jorge Trimshaw, for even she was not that delusional to believe that the red-carpet event was for her benefit. But then again, 'I am different from all of them.
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    Antwortet auf Karamin_Alhaki_6287

    Oh my bad 😂, I misunderstood your initial comment. However, I totally agree with you on this. It’s a spot on comment on her! She’s unbelievable !

    "A-re y-ou sure of this, James?" Even though Clara sounded uncertain, her stance had clearly relaxed, meaning that she believed her husband's words.
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    Antwortet auf Karamin_Alhaki_6287

    Great 💡 idea. I’ll try to implement that to make it easier in differentiating them ☺️

    'I'll paint something meaningful to give to Mum on this as a thank you!' She thought as she settled behind the vanity. Suzie walked up behind her and started to help her dry her hair.
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