Loctovia
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Thank you for your kind words and the corrections too! Most importantly, I’m glad that you enjoyed the story
Thanks for pointing that out. Think of it as figuratively speaking. It’s as if she had just assumed the role of stepmother in a new environment and there will always be limitations in how she thinks she can act especially considering the household she was coming from. So technically the number of days/ weeks that Shelby has spent in the Thornston household does not really matter.
That’s spot on! Yep he is 😃. The idea was to estimate the last time Mirabel had s*x. That would be about 9 months if not more before Collin’s birth and then there was also the fact that Collins’s next birthday was approaching…. So, to estimate it would be just about 8 years since she had ….
I hope so too but …
Good eye 😅. I’ll make that correction. Thank you 😊
My initial reaction after read this comment was to tell you that the later chapters were longer but then I realized that you’ve read quite a bit already so I’m at a loss of words here,😊 . So, I guess I’ll just say, thank you for reading my work and I hope the chapter lengths justify the story for you as you go on…
I can’t help but laugh alongside with you
Oh my bad 😂, I misunderstood your initial comment. However, I totally agree with you on this. It’s a spot on comment on her! She’s unbelievable !
Great 💡 idea. I’ll try to implement that to make it easier in differentiating them ☺️