Reviews of When Our World Ends

Hi to to whoever that's reading this book! It's your author, Mira: Because I've seen several fellow authors give self-reviews, I decided write this one for myself summarising what you can expect from this novel. - This system novel has heavy RPG elements with reference to many popular RPG games and should be realistic enough for any players of this video game genre. - The ending is already decided, including all the major plot twists, hence following the updates will allow you to build-up to these respective events! - There will be TWO chapter updates EVERY DAY unless stated, and this is subject to change after a power stone milestone. - The novel goes through constant editing + paragraphing has been edited to fit the feedback of previous reviewers! - Side characters have a decent role in the plot design so there WILL be significant side characters that have backstories when the main character reaches a certain Friendship Level with them! - The lore is completely original and designed by me with there being a significance in the names as well! (Note: Translations of Hinata and Mizuki) - Any cons would be that it takes a lot of time for there to be established romance since this is a slowburn enemies to lovers dynamic, anyone looking for an explicit Fantasy Romance would have to look forward to future updates to reach a phase where the main couple have admitted to their feelings!

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Think it definitely has potential, will be looking forward to more. The paragraphs are a bit long atm, but apart from that it seems good! I like how the NPC is actually human and interacts naturally off the bat rather than stick with typical NPC norms :)

Just from the first chapter alone, you can tel you’re in for a ride! The opening description is amazing, and immediately hooks me in :) Definitely adding to my collections, and i’ll be watching for new chapters!

Writing quality is top notch, you can expect yourself to easily sink into the story with ease, though I'd like the paragraphs to be a bit shorter, I couldn't rest since everything was too intriguing I like the frenemy situation of the two leads, the sparky remarks and the unyielding pride to admit the other was right, as well as the intentions that feed you information about the world slowly, no info dumps here Lastly, props to the author for the naming

The world building is amazing and more than all of that, the pace at which it goes. It is easy to get involved it and emotionally tug yourself as the character goes ahead through the story. I love the FL and ML interaction 🤭 Keep rolling more chapters author san

Well, what can I say? The story is so unique and flamboyant that it hooked me right in. The character development and world-building are top-notch. I could feel every scene as if it happened right before my eyes. An ingeniously written story that I would recommend everyone to read.

It's cool, just needs a bit of work here and there on grammar. Sometimes the paragraphs are way too long, making it a bit clunky to read as well. I'd recommend grammarly, it works wonders.

hey i just read this and wow , i think that your writing style is brilliant !! i felt very immersed in the story and was absolutely dazzled by your world building and characterization !! i really like the characters and the way you've chosen to write them !! wishing you all the best in this !! - your daughter ❣️❣️❣️

this is a great book with an interesting storyline, it started just like every transmigration books but it has a unique plot to it if you need a good book to bury your heads in then I'd recommend you try reading this you'd definitely enjoy it

the book is too good, but the only thing is the paragraphs too long making difficult to read other than that the character design and word background are good

The updates are great! At least a chapter a day. I love the story! Characters are well developed, world building is great, pacing is just right and writing style is really interesting. The author does a good job with descriptions but not being overly wordy. Overall, a great system book!

Wow. This is a gem! Honestly, the writing quality is really high, and the pace is also really good. The characters are cool as well, so I'm looking forward to reading the entire thing! Well done author!

Not my genre, however, liked reading this novel. Good luck to the author, hopefully you will finish writing it till the end. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

The book is easy to read and it's descriptive as well! Good job! Also, I do have a suggestion. I suggest that you lessen the paragraphs a bit since it's a bit hard to read. I can help you dissect the paragraphs if you'd like! Overall, great book.

wow, I just read the first chapter and was immediately hooked on to this story. I love how the story is progressing so far and the interactions that mizuki has with hinata so far gives me enough to be invested in the relationship[img=update][img=recommend]

The world building in this novel is rich and varied with very interesting scenes and descriptions. The MC and FC have an odd but intriguing way of interacting with each other. It almost feels like a romance novel embedded within a game novel. Keep up the good work author!

Author manages to publish at a reasonably stable rate and the world building is fitting of something I would enjoy reading in a manhwa! I look forward to seeing more from this story ^-^

I've been reading this book for a while now and this is about my second time reviewing but the pacing is still so great and I love it! Keep writing this novel author~