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deletedddd
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The book is easy to read and it's descriptive as well! Good job! Also, I do have a suggestion. I suggest that you lessen the paragraphs a bit since it's a bit hard to read. I can help you dissect the paragraphs if you'd like! Overall, great book.

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When Our World Ends

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Thank you for the feedback as well as the praise! I'll definitely consider it as I continue to write this novel. >^<