Review Detail of Ephemerality in When Our World Ends

Item: When Our World Ends
Rating: 4.8

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EphemeralityLv102yrEphemerality

Think it definitely has potential, will be looking forward to more. The paragraphs are a bit long atm, but apart from that it seems good! I like how the NPC is actually human and interacts naturally off the bat rather than stick with typical NPC norms :)

When Our World Ends

mirxkewl

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mirxkewlAuthormirxkewl

Thank you so much! I wanted to make this game feel as natural as possible while incorporating the proper system elements at the same time. I've adjusted the paragraphs as well, thank you for the rating! :)

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