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VEDANTA: THE PRIMORDIAL

When the Universe first gained sentience; The First Firmament was born and out of boredom of the first few billion years, he created the first sentient beings and gave them the task to create and destroy life for his own enjoyment. Thus began the story of MARVEL, as known by many... But! what if there was another... what if the Universe gave birth to two sentient beings... The one unknown to the Universe itself... The other Primordial...

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Prologue

On a beautiful night, inside the emergency ward of a famous multispecialty hospital, a young doctor was lying on the floor, grasping to breathe, his body riddled with bullets and his white coat slowly turning maroon.

He had just stitched a patient with a bullet wound and some cuts and bruises, and when he was about to leave the patient after some final checkups, the door to the emergency ward opened with a thud, in came three lanky fellows covering their faces with 'Monkey-caps', swinging what looked like 'home-assembled' guns.

First came the sound of some air shots and warning shouts to empty the premise, and then one of them ran straight to the patient that was just stitched up and shoved the gun on his forehead, but before he could pull the trigger, the doctor kicked the guy's knee and jabbed his jaw, and as he was taking the gun from that fellows' hands, the other two shot multiple times at him and then shot the patient, before picking their comrade and bolting out of the building.

Now, the young doctor lying in the pool of his blood was slowly losing consciousness, while his ears were ringing with the shouts of doctors and nurses, who were ironically shouting for help...

This was how the young doctor; Vedanta died... ironically and naively...

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A/N: This story is half inspired by fanfiction that I read a few months ago[Marvel: Breezing through history as an eternal] and [Grandpa Universe in Multiverse], the rest is my own spin on marvel universe(comics and movies both) and some original world history.

Now I would also address my previous work, which for now is on hiatus, if any of the previous readers are reading this book, I am sorry for leaving that work for months now. Although I had already completed more than 60% of that book, I did not post that on Webnovel or anywhere else, as in January of this year, when I showed the work to one of my friends(self-publication author), she told me the story idea was amazing but the writing was not good enough if I was taking publishing novels as a serious job; my answer being yes, the better solution that I received was to write some fanfictions as practice (story should be completed), so after few months of reading some good fanfictions and other novels, while still attending my degree, I am starting this fanfiction.

I hope whoever reads this can leave some constructive criticism, in regards to my writing skills.

Thank you for reading my rant!