Reviews of UpLeftDownRight Marvel
UpLeftDownRight Marvel
Drax152
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The character development and story are a bit messy but still very good for an *******. The absence of obvious fault and massacre of the English language is a very welcome change from what this app usually propose. A good enough fanfic to pass time and feel like you've had a good moment when you finish your chapter.
Dropped at chapter 5 for a few reasons. 1 author didn't edit it so that chapters 1 - 3 are actually chapters and not rants. 2 not clear so far on which marvel he is in there are alot of series of marvel 3 I dont like HAREM novels majority of authors are terrible at writing it 4 the steel staff which has 1 in 4 chance of destroying a limb if struck is to op for a weakassed mc 5 the karate thing, it be better if it was something like understanding of martial arts, it be collectively all his understanding and not a singular martial art. There are PLENTY OF BETTER martial arts in marvel than karate Suggestions to author 1 take an A4 sheet of paper draw line down middle and make a plot of what you want your story to have 2 change karate to martial artist 3 change steel staff description it's to op for a weak mc 4 READ OTHER MARVEL FANFICTION AUTHORS 5 know which marvel timeline you are going down and what you wish to change
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OK I am a few chapters in and this is a good game/system/marvel fan fic so far. Right now it seems to have a Spider-man level feel to it, witch I like....and the most praise worthy part of the story is the humor. I will make a new review if this goes off the rails but as it stands is a good start! P.S. This story is worth investing your Power Stones in like me.
Too much cursing and vulgar speech. It actually demotivated me to read further. The characters are not described properly, the timeline is not specified and the system is annoying and YES the PENALITIES ARE DEATH SOMETIMES. In conclusion, it is a very insufferable self insert with edgy "trying to be cool but ending up being a jerk" MC.
I really like this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!βΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊβΊ
I think the best advice that I can tell you is to read the spider. There are only small similarities in the stories but I think most of what you are looking for in your story is there. (From how to develop the story, to introduce and evolve characters and, if needed, how to get the harem that you are looking for)
