i read books.
Happy birthday, XD
Ein Sama is Best!
This is good!
Maybe have him interact with the story of rwby and ruin it entirely.
I want zeel to get emotions already, wtf is taking so long? years... and he still an 90% emotionless idiot.
Roada! rolla! da!
well, SORRY for trying to help you refine your writing style.
Maybe use this
those line-break underscores are really distracting! can you change them back to maybe like 2 dashes?
Thius is good so far
ty for taking it into consideration bro!
more spacing between paragraphs, and punctuation, please.
you need punctuation!