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The plot is nice, and there are less grammar errors, none i could point out actually, but you still need a lot to work on, i love that the siblings are in a good relationship, no fighting over family wealth kinda thing. You need to work on your plot introduction, try to make it more catchy and I'm sure readers will be hooked I wish you good luck in your novel 🎩 😁 👕👍Great! 👖
I feel it’s quite early to give a detailed review since it only has 5 chapters. Based on what I have read so far, the plot and the characters are interesting. There are a few grammar mistakes in the book but it doesn’t greatly affect the presentation of the story. Overall, this book has potential. :) Kudos to the author for this book and their hard work!
There isn't much for me to nitpick here except the small number of grammar errors ( getting an editor would easily fic that). I also suggest you break your paragraphs into smaller ones so that it doesn't feel too burdening while reading. The plot is good, the background the story is based on seems fine too. I couldn't give a detailed review since we are just 2 chapters into the story. Good luck, don't drop.