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ok I am writing this review for one reason only alot readers have been turned off from this fan fic as there is one chapter that references cultivation which I agree I do not like it either. However the author has done it as a joke reference only so for now you can ignore that it was mentioned and hopefully never comes back. Considering everything you should read this fan fic and give it a chance.
Still giving this fic a 5. Some times people need to chill and not think much of things not important and reading this novel is a need if you want to read a relaxing, thrilling and quality guaranteed fic. Though there are others that are much more outstanding, we should commend the author for his job well done.
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Love the story, hope you keep up the updates and dont drop it. Overall I like his proactive aproach and would like to see where he takes the world of marvel, Will you take over the world, rule from the shadow, kill all the worst evil villains and Just chill and let your Ai and subordinates take care of the test. Idk but I cant wait to find out :) I Just hope you kill of the friends of humanity and change the name of mutants to meta humans and improve their social standing so they at least have the same rights. <3
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To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
I love how you actually thought doug was powerful. He can barely fight thor and hulk could kill him 10x over without a sweat let alone anybody else in the marvel universe. Just vecause he can take down some humans and baseline superhumans does not mean he is powerful enough to even touch hulk at his best.
Well, i overall is good, the writing quality is 4/5. In the story my only problem is the dialogs and the rush, men they are cringe, but the narrations is good. The story progresses really fast and the MC gets OP reaaally fast, i hate how rushed it is. The story progresses in a decent pace, you can see that the goal of the MC is get stronger but the main focus is recruit people and build up his things. There is a pleasant number of chapters aswell.
Superb writing with few to minor typos or mistakes. Great choice of story development. Together with a good chracter development for MC makes an overall, the one of the best if not the best marvel fanfic yet. Though I would love it to have a better fighting sequence especially when the perspective changes. A even just a little bit more words for visualizing the fighting scenes itself. Anw, love your work. Hope you continue on with the story with an even better quality. Thanks for this great work of yours. :))