Agreed 100% one of the Best natasha pairings that isnt forced. If he manages to Tell her the truth about him in a `good` way and not make the drama and make up too angsty, I Dare say it Will be the Best fanfic pairing.i honestly have no idea how I Would go about writing This so I cant wait to read it :)
Dont worry about anyone talking about nerfs or weak MC or w/e Marvel is honestly confusing in the power scale if you add mutants and cosmic entities into the scale cuz if your not a reality manipulator youre weak lol. But in your story there are probably none other than magic and infinity Stones so I think his strength is at the perfect lvl to easily win But not be too overpowered. Well at least not yet :) love the story either way cant wait for more chapters Keep it up :D
Agreed, I hate the mutant comics and movies, fcking stupid imo. Xavier is the worst and everyone is always stupid. Like the stronger the mutant the dumber they are, either finding stupid reasons not to Use their powers or full power/potential or in the case of bad guys being stupid and cocky/insane and usualy with meh powers if the bad guy is op they Just lose in a stupid plot convinience kind of way. Not to mention all the insane goverments that hate mutans and want to create supersoldiers all the time...but People Just Dont seem to care about it being evil...and Just generaly all the civilians are huge dicks in Marvel
Why the delayng? Just deal with the elders or Tell hiruzen you have a plan...I dont know why any si Would allow things to progress like This when he can easily stop it... Like theleport all the elder and clan head some where, beat them down and show them how weak they are and order them to rein In their ambission ez
Huh, I guess that makes sense, kind of weird Roger would give Ace to garp instead of rayleigh then. And I guess rayleigh Just didnt want to baby Ace :c Dick move anyway lol
I thought rayleigh didnt know Ace was Rogers son until after the war. Only garp knew until Ace told whitebeard so after that whitebeard commanders + blackbeard knew and I thought he told the marine when he caught Ace. Not sure though, But I Would guess they Would kill him before he reached the New world if they knew
Would he kill his captains son tho? :/ yea probably lol
Well the whole willingly letting orochi put his soul in you with the curse mark seems kinda dumb unless he is 100%sure he can get rid of it completly unlike in the anime where itachi had to help even after sasuke won the strugle. And why would he want to go after itachi and not danzo now that he knows the truth? I do uderstand that he wouldnt want to be friends with anyone in konoha tho. They are all pretty dumb...maybe anko and him could work out lol
Possibly a future best one piece fanfic, sadly there are too few chapters until now to make a better review but I love the story and characters so far :) i cant wait to see what story you come up with for his journey to become and as a yonko :D
and @author about People Just writing their ideas, I think you shouldnt take it to heart. You can read the comments take some ideas and ignore others. You shouldnt try to change your story cuz of them tho :) and I love you story and the direction your taking it is great :) if you have a MC that ass pulls training to become op cuz he saw it without proper explanation it kinda ruins it and makes your future story and progress Hard as you said :) I feel ya and Keep up the good work. Love the update speed!
Sadly I uderstand that ignoring negative comments and suggestions is impossible, everyone Would feel bad if People are thinking negativly about their Hard work. Thats why lots of authors quit writing over time, cuz they try to ignore the negativity But it Just builds up. So I hope my fellow readers try to Keep a positive and or constructive criticism if needed.
Hope so m8, I love the story so far :) and at least you gave the other story a ending, even if it was a rushed one :p
I think he already had the shin/hashi arm since orochimaru was branded a traitor or got it from him a bit after that, he probably had some random sharingan he Got from dead uchiha in the 3rd war in his right eye and arm, maybe also not as many But orochi probably needed quite a few before he Got it right. In the show it also shows obito had a lot of spare sharingan after he uses izanagi vs konan so he and danzo probably both stole them in the massacre. But danzo probably only aded shisuis eye and kept the test for loyal root soldiers, Who knows :) anyway dobt worry too much about stuff like that. There are often loopholes and inconsistencies in shows so Just write what you want imo
Haha, I can honestly see rayleigh training luffys willpower by putting meat in front of him and telling him to just look at it and not eat it lol