Review Detail of Primordial_Origin in Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)

Superb writing with few to minor typos or mistakes. Great choice of story development. Together with a good chracter development for MC makes an overall, the one of the best if not the best marvel fanfic yet. Though I would love it to have a better fighting sequence especially when the perspective changes. A even just a little bit more words for visualizing the fighting scenes itself. Anw, love your work. Hope you continue on with the story with an even better quality. Thanks for this great work of yours. :))