Reviews of Travelling throughout the Omniverse in DxD

I think I know what he might be talking about in his note on chapter 1, but I won't say it as I want to make you guys who don't know about 'it's suffer.

꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!

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I dont know what to say as every thing now is a bit too similar too certain novel reincarnating as Tatsuya too to bad i forgot the novels name I hope author will not be copykng this much as it will be harder to write chapterc later on

[As of chapter 5] Writing and update stability are good. The story isn't really set yet, but with how it's going I expect a generic giant harem story. The characters are dumb. Even ignoring how the goddesses acted why is every girl in the story horny for MC on seeing him, even when he's 6. The MC goes to a church where he finds miyuki and goes to adopt her AS A 6 YEAR OLD. The exorcist can for some reason ignore all his skills and feel his powers. Honestly did the author even once read what he wrote and thought about it?

All these 5 stars rating are from dumbasses. Dude made a skill to hide his supernatural status, and the first supernatural he meet can sense the supernatural energies in him? Stupid as f*ck. Dude just arrived, just discovered the astral plane, and start absorbing energy left and right without thinking of his own protection in that place. Worse, he decided to fight a dragon. 6yo kid living on his own? No animes is that lacking in common sense. Orphans are always under the care of an orphanage, relative, guardian or such, unless they are homeless street rats. 5yo kid already being sexually attracted to a 6yo kid? Please. All teenage girls and ***** women being charmed by a 6yo kid? And not in a ‘how cute’ way? Please. Did the author read the comments of the story he took inspiration from? Because it looks like he kept all the negative elements from it.

Knowing your a fellow bretheren, wag mo e drop kung d ipa Tulfo kita xD Entertain us Lodi Ps: Is this harem or not? Magaling kaba sa mga Rated 18 scenes?

im a fellow filipino thats why i'll be a little bias hahah ill give u 5 star wag mu lang i drop support kita haha...................................

Tol nandito akitch 😂 your number one support 😁👍 Tol nandito akitch 😂 your number one support 😁👍 Tol nandito akitch 😂 your number one support 😁👍 Tol nandito akitch 😂 your number one support 😁👍

It's pretty much just a copy paste of the fanfic Life in DxD. They not only reincarnated as the same person, Tatsuya Shiba, but they also have the same abilities as in Life in DxD. Skill Creation, Saiki K's Psychic Ability. Not to mention their also both "High Humans." This novel is literally a copy paste in the first 5 chapters, I didn't read any past that which is why I didn't vote any higher or lower.

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I liked your work continue in the same spirit and improve. Please don't add characters too quickly! ___________________________________________

Good novel .............................................................................................................................

Love this story hope you keep writing it.....................................................................................................

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This is good. A bit (a whole lot) cliche but really good. Author don't have to worry about grammar, i think you did a good job on it. Also Shout out from the Philippines my fellow filipino😛😛😛