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Patrick_star
Patrick_starLv113yrPatrick_star

I really don't like putting negative reviews but i can't understand how a 6 year old kid can go into an orphanage and take a girl claiming to be her brother and the ***** there just let it go. And how can you make a girl no more than 5 or 6 have sexual attraction to her so-called brother. Sorry man but this ain't for me. hope you have good time with your story

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Travelling throughout the Omniverse in DxD

Dioscuri

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Dioscuri
DioscuriAuthorDioscuri

I understand. Thank you for at least giving review, I appreciate it. I'll take into account your thoughts as I advance in the art of Writing Stories.

Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

I dont know if I will read this any time soon. But word of advice, Age plays a big part in sexual attraction. If he is not old enough, he wont be physically attracted to anything. He might like someone but it wont be sexual at all. His body literally cant be physically attracted to anyone till he hits puberty. Do with this information as you will.

Dioscuri:I understand. Thank you for at least giving review, I appreciate it. I'll take into account your thoughts as I advance in the art of Writing Stories.
Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

Before that age it would be a more innocent form of love. Like your body cant get an erection or release hormones that would make you lust over someone. But you can like them and feel good in their presence. What I am trying to say is, even if the person has memories of being 18, if they are in a younger body they will be less prone to think about ***. and when they do it wont be because their body is craving it. I could be wrong, so you can do further research. But I don't think that having relationships form before both are 14 is a good idea.

Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

To me it's also annoying how every woman that sees him gets horny or smtn the second they do. Author even said women 5-30 blush seeing him, a 6 year old kid lol.

Zerak:Before that age it would be a more innocent form of love. Like your body cant get an erection or release hormones that would make you lust over someone. But you can like them and feel good in their presence. What I am trying to say is, even if the person has memories of being 18, if they are in a younger body they will be less prone to think about ***. and when they do it wont be because their body is craving it. I could be wrong, so you can do further research. But I don't think that having relationships form before both are 14 is a good idea.
Zerak
ZerakLv11Zerak

Ya, that is an instant no no for me.

Inferno_Vor:To me it's also annoying how every woman that sees him gets horny or smtn the second they do. Author even said women 5-30 blush seeing him, a 6 year old kid lol.
SCP3812
SCP3812Lv3SCP3812

I agree, only time thats gonna happen is a shota-con and that's only from the physical age of 13 and above, and there is just no way there are so many weirdos in kuoh

Inferno_Vor:To me it's also annoying how every woman that sees him gets horny or smtn the second they do. Author even said women 5-30 blush seeing him, a 6 year old kid lol.
GAMING_IS_MUST
GAMING_IS_MUSTLv14GAMING_IS_MUST

I mean man he is right the girl has to at least hit puberty to have some kind of sexual attraction or it's not possible in any scientific or realistic way

Dioscuri:I understand. Thank you for at least giving review, I appreciate it. I'll take into account your thoughts as I advance in the art of Writing Stories.