Reviews of Trapped On A Death World
Trapped On A Death World
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interesting story, with a mc, that at least for now not super powerful, which is appreciated, because otherwise it would only be boring, which is appreciated. Yes, the females of the harem are not human. (girls with octopus faces, or aranachet ...) So I do not expect, that finds ecchi scenes, not even less +18
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An intriguing and catchy title! :) Big plus for that :) There are a lot of fanasty on WebNovel. It is not easy to create someting new, original and different... so I wish you a lot of crazy ideas! :) I read your story with pleasure :) The plot is captivating and characters are expressive. There are also interseting descriptions. All the best! Keep writing!
Aside from a few grammatical errors which could easily be overlooked, this story is of much higher quality than many you can find on WebNovel. I enjoy the blend of Sci-Fi and Fantasy, with youkai (I think that was a youkai) and AI all presenting in the first chapter. Keep up the good work, and I believe you'll excel in no time, Author!♥
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