Bloom759
Kon'nichiwa I can't and refuse to be ashamed of my book. 😌 Although my writing style or portrayal of the world might be a bit strange to you all. Grammar is well umm...well... Reasonable constructive criticism and not straight out dissing is welcome 🙇🏻♀️ This is my first system novel and I don't know how suiting it is to you readers 👀hence my ratings. From the first arc(volume) the character takes a trip to an alternate world and how he developed his antihero character. ~Although I don't know if the reason for him taking this course seems plausible to you all 👀 Starting from the next arc(volume) deals with him infiltrating an organisation which had a big play in what he had become. The remaining arc should be determined by you readers 😅. You could drop your interpretation of the arc once the chapters for it are up. There are subtle references to anime scenes or character as my character does love anime [*cough *cough so do I], so you could drop them here if you spotted them. Any questions you have on the book could be asked here! I'd try to answer to the best of my ability while keeping it vague if you are asking for spoilers. Arigatōgozaimasu
I don't remember how i stumbled on this novel (actually i do,but i think that's not to relevant), I've read my fair share of "transmigrated/reincarnated" type of novels so I think i can somewhat be fair in this review. While the starting is generic like in most novels of this type (except for the part where the MC is an artist? maybe..) the first few chapters are kinda chaotic,i think is reflecting the MC not adapting to the "new reality" and maybe it's a "throw off" for some of the readers, but then it get better. The "system" has his own "personality" so to say (and maybe it doesn't want what's best for you all the time),the powers are "gifts" and can be somewhat transferred,and from chapter 14 you starting to get clues about the main plot and the pacing of the story starts to ramp up. I've given 4.4/5 🌟 cuz i liked the story so far. For those who likes "transmigration" type give it a chance..it really gets better and it has a somewhat unique approach on the "genre" for the rest my advice is to read till chapter 10-12 before making an opinion,also the synopsis doesn't really do justice to the story. For those who survived reading till here,in my defence i had no idea that from a simple review I'll go on a rant this much... Wish you all the best!!
Okay, I am heavily confused, I think I might be going crazy? cause I read too chapter 20 and so far, the grammar is HORRID and the sentences are confusing as heck, the pacing is absolutely WACK and the world-building feels rushed, am I just going crazy? Why are there GOOD reviews? Is this actually a good story and I just need to go to an insane asylum?
I tried really hard to like this but I just can't. I'm very confused and nothing makes sense. The family interaction is weird. The MC has constant mood swings of being angry and then guilty for no reason whatsoever. Does he like them or dislike them ? Do they like him or dislike him? We never find out. Then he goes to the academy without knowing anything and just shows off everywhere, casually insults teachers and casually harasses women that always like it. Also this guy defeated a dragon, supposedly the strongest kind of creature in the world after about a day of being there. Is he invincible now? If dragons are that weak then why are they a threat? Are teachers stronger than him, cause he doesn't seem worried at all even in the middle of enemy territory. Sorry for the bad review but I really don't get it.
Bad not recommended but if you want read it then. Read it I already read this novel in the past I mean few months ago I was one of the new reader I stumbled this story and read for about 80 chapter but I quite love them but the problem the story I mean there are so many useless writing just put writing count and it was rushed because the author think the story is already good and the author tried not putting a cliche stories but it was still so cliche and can't do anything because the author only want word count and Not the story if it was for me but I think it was best read few chapter then if you love them then. Read it because the the story is like cycle