DanROJE
2-3 chaps per day and u get my soul πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬
THIS IS THE RATING THAT THIS FANFIC DESERVES Ok, stability of updates is perfect, every day 1,2, or 3 chapters are posted... Mc is more like a side character, at first it's fast paced fanfic but slowly and surely mc is becoming interesting... And mc would get future skill of chloe but nerfed version of, atleast that's what author said, grammar is 4.. it isn't perfect but definitely above the average on webnovel.. MC also can be boring at times, but atleast he's not idiot..... he's more spectating type but i hope in future he would become more active...
Grammar { 5} Updates{5}, one, two or three chapters , at day Story development{ 5} it's 70 same as canon, but as it's said in first chapter, mc is type of side and supportive character... Story development{ 5} mc does interacts with sins, his power is based on the huge difference in power levels, has 3000 power level, i1800 in strength double of Meliodas,, that clears , why he can beat opponents of 1,500 or 2,000 without experience, Character design{5} author tried, mc is type of observative person, he won't jump to save someone if he can't beat the enemy, has some martial arts, which also explains why he can fight , world background:{5}
This is my review, I hope it can help you author sama. : 1. There are some grammatical error that can be improved. Try using grammarly to improve it. 2. Will there be romance for the OC MC ?. I hope it is Yuri romance or at least normal romance when the OC MC in Veldora form. 3. Did this story will go to multiverse after Nanatsu no taizai plot end ? 4. This story need more character interaction, because this is Fanfic try to be creative when making the dialog between character. 5. Keep up the good work and please keep updating this story author sama. Thank you and please give us more chapter ππ».
Firstly, the story is pretty nice to read with a realistic Mc who isnβt dumb. The interactions of Veldora/Chloe with the other characters are great but the real problem there is that there is too many tiny time skip which make the story confusing and very difficult to understand if you didnβt watch Sds. Also the grammar is pretty much trash which make the story difficult to read.
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