Review Detail of SkelSmt in Transmigrated into Seven Deadly Sins
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Firstly, the story is pretty nice to read with a realistic Mc who isn’t dumb. The interactions of Veldora/Chloe with the other characters are great but the real problem there is that there is too many tiny time skip which make the story confusing and very difficult to understand if you didn’t watch Sds. Also the grammar is pretty much trash which make the story difficult to read.
Transmigrated into Seven Deadly Sins
DanROJE
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DanROJE:oi, grammar is not that bad, plus my first language is not english. what did you expect, that's just too harsh to say.... for time skips. yea it can't be helped, that's why there is not many sds fanfic...
it's true but. compared to 50 percent of ff, it's pretty good, but it's seems like you are pretty new to webnovel, there are many grammars that are worse than my own, so in other words I'm pretty much proud of my own grammar....... i like it,,,.. but I'm not saying you aren't right, I'm only saying , that here exist much worse grammars than my own..
SkelSmt:Tbh the grammar is pretty bad (except for the newer chap) but the book is still good.
