Reviews of Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
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Author's shameless 5-star review. Some things about the story and plot, ~It's a One Piece fan-fic with good story building and strength progression from weak to strong. ~MC's strength will soar after a small time-skip which will be around the 70th chapter. ~There's a possibility of MC crossing to the Naruto realm. It's just my thought, I haven't planned it yet. ~There will be no harem. Happy Reading Everyone!!
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So the premise of the story is pretty good. You know why the MC is unique and what his goals are right from the beginning. My problem with it is how xianxia it is. I mean seriously killing intent pressuring him? It’s one piece, only conquerors haki should be able to do that. Also, using poison is dishonorable according to the family murdering slaver pirate? Seriously? If you are okay with the cultivation work type writing then you will love the story. If not, well then you are like me.
Pretty mediocre...... Feels like cultivation novel.... Beaten tropes like merit points are prevalent in the story and the way his devil fruit works makes no sense... Mc is pretty unlikable as well as stupid... He, for some reason won't learn coo even though the method to train it was clearly shown in the Canon... Most of his enemies are plain stupid and Akainu is almost a caricature of himself... Author forced the plot when he wanted the mc to be enemies with Akainu... The higher-ups just allowed Akainu to sabotage the mc for some reason even though they knew how much potential he had not caring for the fact that he may develop some resentment towards the system as a result... So yeah... It's pretty mediocre but it's better than 90% of the other trash on this site....
was a great novel until, 160 chapters in, the author suddenly decided to make it into a crossover by sending the mc to the hunterxhunter universe, and putting in the authors note that the mc would stay there for 30-40 chapters... since i've never seen hunterxhunter i obviously dropped the story, but even if i had seen it i'd still give 1 start since it's pretty f*cked up to just suddenly make it a crossover without giving any warning to the readers, or even putting a crossover tag on the novel.
MC is very naive world government is 800 yrs old and their main fighting force is marines it won't be very easy as MC believes to stage a coup by using absolute strength he will have to be essentially more powerful than im himself for that then there is whole logistics and funding prblm MC isn't really the best in those to manage those In a coup and from what I can say he isn't really charismatic either. Best practical way would be to become a spy for revolutionary army or betray marines at the right time dealing maximum damage then becoming a pirate possibly a emperor so that he can slowly chip away WG forces. And I don't think they will let fisher tiger live he has raided marei goies after all. But then again this is a fanfic so u have the author's licence i guess. But still this story has good potential perhaps make it a little more practical then it will be legendary
The premise is interesting however in the 30 chapters I have read so far just consisted of the main character being arrogant, conceited, hypocritical, and had a screw loose in his head. He needs a reality check asap! Grammar and spelling I see a few mistakes here and there, but not so much that will affect your reading immersion. This fanfic is heavily inspired by chinese novels, the mc his character becomes more and more like a typical Xianxia cultivator. Pros - One piece is the best. If you like Escanor from Seven Deadly Sins then you will probably like this. The mc has the ability of Escanor, bloodline of a Senju, system with no consciousness that will force him to do irritating task. Cons - The mc is cringe like your typical chinese Xianxia cultivator. Overall this is good for a fanfic I just can't stomach the mc and the author is clearly improving in writing, give this one a try maybe you'll like it but it's not for me.
(P.S this is a good 3 star, 3.8 to be exact) First off this story had a somewhat nice start and it was interesting as he went the marine route and although there are numerous ff like this most of them butcher the story except for a few like 'God of soul system' which actually has a good marine story. Apart from that the characters are mostly loyal to the story and the MC isn't that bad, he sometimes cringes but it's not annoying. My only complaint is that the dialogue is sometimes, cringe. Not even being mean sometimes their dialogue goes to the typical wuxia novels but revert back in the following chapter, 'heaven-defying type of stuff. It's only in chapter 30 so I'm not going to drop it for stupid reasons like that but the author hasn't updated in 4-5 days so it might've been dropped... good luck author hope you continue the story!
Review after chapter 85 {>°<} This story is near painfully average. The MC is average, his DF is supposedly super OP but only at endgame but so is potentially any DF. His only other power, which could potentially grant him near godly powers after some training, is nerfed to oblivion and he's only slight toucher skinned with a healing factor. His talent is average for someone meant for New World, I'd say his talent is below Luffy by 50%. He spends 4-6 years doing what Luffy did in 2-3. And in a meta perspective, he doesn't have anything unique about him. His situation is average for someone going thru marine training in the Elite course with contrarian ambitions. He is constantly punished for slights against the WG but basically accepts it, making excuses that with his System, he can cope. Which is true, but it doesn't mean he has to lose gains because of corrupt marines! This MC is too honest but without the plot armor rewards. His Conquerer's Haki is undeserved because, despite it being strong, he doesn't really show the qualities of a King. He really lacks the natural charisma to have a good crew/support base etc. His CH is awakened by a random trick while he has no clue about the there two. It's pretty embarrassing for an Isekai person imo. He doesn't really use future knowledge other than as a Pokedex, ooing and aaing when meeting famous characters. Sure he saves Kuina but that girl isn't important at all other than in fanfiction. Finally, his face is too average! Seriously, no sign of a romantic interest in almost 90 chapters. The barely a thing with Gion was cut by small betrayal and separation and it almost feels like he things of nothing but fighting and food. He's like discount Goku, the discounts being the paragraphs above.
