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Hog9808mthCommentedBased off Leo won’t he be gone for years?
Augustus let out a heavy sigh before answering, "I must return to my world. It's only for a while, so there's no need for you guys to worry."- Hog9808mthCommented
Wrong name
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Does he not need sleep?
Despite his efforts, almost three months passed by in a flash, and there was no significant improvement, except for a modest increase of 5 points in his MAG stats. - Hog9808mthCommented
Basilisk
[Your Da Vinci looks at the eggs, feeling a sense of compassion...] - Hog9808mthCommented
How do these people live with so few items? That was 3 floors and 12 apartments!
From the 13th to the 10th floor, no zombies were found, and he successfully found some living supplies, three bottles of cola, two bottles of Sprite, three large barrels of mineral water, and seven or eight small bottles of mineral water, plus some vegetables like carrots. - Hog9809mthCommented
Couldn’t just back up and close the hatch? Let them burn in their own for a bit before going back in?
Less than half a minute later, the flamethrower's nozzle was still at 89% critical temperature. Fang Heng had no choice but to press the switch again. - Hog9809mthReplied to I_Am_Death
Yeah, I thought hunters would get paid from monster material
Looking over in the direction of the nest, Lake quickly left the area as he began to stealthily make his way over. - Hog9809mthCommented
So she can do whatever with lightening and he can only make blades with space? Sounds like he got the raw end of that deal if those blades that cut space are seemingly slower than lightening and not able to cut into the bigger rat zombie from before.
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I take it that Lola is somehow going to stumble upon some supernatural stuff and get super powers.
The air inside the tunnel was musty and filled with a sense of ancient secrecy. The walls were lined with fading murals and inscriptions, hinting at a history long forgotten. Lola's heart raced as she realized they were venturing into uncharted territory, away from the chaos above. - Hog98011mthCommented
So you are saying that would have worked for hiding it in the first place…
He answered flatly, "Once the stone had been removed, its trackable signature seemed to have widened from a small space to a vast area. All anyone knows is that it is somewhere in the UK. We can't even tell if it is Ireland, Scotland, Great Britain, or still in Hogwarts herself." - Hog9801yrCommented
Can he teleport? How did he get back without anyone noticing or tracking him?
While everyone was trying to get in touch with him, Notch had already said goodbye to Tony and Emmett and returned to his cabin, now looking like Alex again. - Hog9801yrCommented
2 seconds is actually fairly long, she would see him disappear without any issue
After hearing his grandpa's words, she focused on that car. She can see a person in that car. At first, she did not understand why grandpa told her to look at this car. But then she understood because she saw that the person that was in the car vanished from his car for two seconds. Well, she wasn't exactly able to see that, but she was able to see that the person became blurred for a second and in the next second she was once again able to see him clearly. - Hog9801yrCommented
Poor grandma is a footnote.
"Ten million citizens are registered. We have finished developing the slums, and Grandma Lin moved into the city. The commoners all have jobs. Our light industry, heavy industry, agriculture, animal husbandry, forestry, and mining are all developing." - Hog9801yrCommented
Well that’s obviously going to come back to bite him
He immediately understood he was successful and got a lot of pleasure from it. His face was so radiant that multiple people noticed the odd behavior, but Erik didn't care. It felt great being able to manipulate someone like that without them even noticing. - Hog9801yrPosted
Hey! Author here and I thought I'd give myself a glowing review. Figure if I can't believe in myself then why would any of my readers. Hope you all enjoy the book. Also, please leave a review of what you think and how I could make it better, my writing style means that although I have a plot in mind sometimes it goes off the rails. Thanks for reading!
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Seriously? No thoughts of using seals? That’s like the cheat codes of the Narutoverse
"Not particularly. I planned on studying Genjutsu and maybe some Medical Ninjutsu but… I'm not going to actively pursue them." Daichi gave a nonchalant answer. - Hog9802yrCommented
I think you need him to face challenges. By the time he met Ruby he was already the most powerful person on the planet. I think you should keep the power level of summoned characters and Juan to that of the world he is in. Don’t give him Dragon Ball levels of power in RWBY.
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I made it through chapter 7 and had to stop. One of those chapters was filled with the thought of the MC as he described a pretty girl fighting. That was the entire chapter. Not once did the thought of using his ability help her cross his mind until he was personally in danger. Even then, he was angry for the being 50 levels above him daring to try to hurt him. This was all after he talked about cliche MCs being all cocky and arrogant for no reason. If you don’t like the cliche MC being arrogant immediately after receiving his cheat then you will not like this.