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can I ask where you were and what happened?
to get harry osborns attention.
snapper. I then grabbed
off the bus. I stretched
on a rock. when we got
you can leave now. your shuttle is departing soon. "
he said as he handed me a hunting knife
since you learned well and followed my orders well I got you this ...
proud to have taught you. you...
punctuation makes this sentence feel clearer even if you don't change the wording. it makes the speech feel like multiple sentences with pauses which is realistic instead if a run-on sentence that comes off unnatural and confusing. :)
periods and commas are very useful. when you end a sentence and want to add more information use the period or a semicolon. if you end a sentence but the sentence feels incomplete then use the comma with a word or words that attach the two bits Like " but, thought,as well, ect.".
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