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KhadaFourJhin
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(P.S this is a good 3 star, 3.8 to be exact) First off this story had a somewhat nice start and it was interesting as he went the marine route and although there are numerous ff like this most of them butcher the story except for a few like 'God of soul system' which actually has a good marine story. Apart from that the characters are mostly loyal to the story and the MC isn't that bad, he sometimes cringes but it's not annoying. My only complaint is that the dialogue is sometimes, cringe. Not even being mean sometimes their dialogue goes to the typical wuxia novels but revert back in the following chapter, 'heaven-defying type of stuff. It's only in chapter 30 so I'm not going to drop it for stupid reasons like that but the author hasn't updated in 4-5 days so it might've been dropped... good luck author hope you continue the story!

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