Titanfall system in mass effect

the story seems great so far. but I'm starting to wonder if this is going to be a one chapter story with a good start that never sees an update again. because there's a lot of them on the Internet. and it could be for any number of reasons. for example the author didn't plan out further than the first chapter and now doesn't know what to do with it or something else 🤔. also I'll give a better review when there's more to actually look at.

The start of the book seems great to me. I love mass effect and fanfics like these. Hope to see continuous updates and see where you go with the story, author.

Great story Don't read my review, it's all filler. Look at my horse My horse is amazing Give it a lick! Mmm! It tastes just like raisins Have a stroke of its mane It turns into a plane And then he turns back again When you tug on his winky Ooh, that's dirty! Do you think so? Well, I better not show you where the lemonade is made Sweet lemonade Mmm, sweet lemonade Sweet lemonade Yeah, sweet lemonade Get on my horse! I'll take you 'round the universe And all the other places, too I think you'll find that the universe pretty much covers everything Shut up, woman, get on my horse

this has good potential. only problem is the chapters as they take so long to update. i hope there can be an increase in chapters because i really enjoy this book.

This story had an excellent idea and presented it well seeing a Mass Effect and Titanfall mix is certainly unique but alas it'd been year as much as I would love to see an update I don't think it's going happen.

Writing quality is pretty good with only a few grammar errors here and there. Update stability is decent, and the story development isn't too slow or too fast (It seems fast, but no one really wants to go through 40 chapters of a characters' childhood). The character design from what I have seen thus far is good, and the world background is... Okay. Overall it's a good read to pass the time.