DarkAce_Ghosts

it is by no means bad this is one of my favorites and as far as quality goes it tops alot of the other fan fics.

A new chapter is nice but I was hoping for it to continued from where the last chapter left off. I personally feel like the story hops around too much.

is there going to be more chapters it's been 4 months

alright yah got me I guess I will continue

Gotta say I personally don't like the merging of comic book universes with the movie ones but alas I guess I will see where this goes I have come this far anyways

Forgot to mention that the Mc seem useless without the system telling her what to do

The way other characters interact with the protagonist is weird they seem to gain trust in the Mc way to fast and fall in love with her to point where their holding hands and passionately making out after knowing each other for literally two days.

I personally feel that the Beginning before the Mc got to her new world dragged on way to long. Aside from that the writing and Characters and story so far are fantastic

This whole story is simply outstanding the fact that it such a limited number of views is baffling.

Your trying your best and putting time into your story the chapter length shows that so keep it up