ChellyArks
It's rare not having a bunch of new characters at once. Just one to begin with was much welcomed. I was surprised with the rich vocabulary from the very beginning of the story, it might be a little overwhelming for someone who barely played a rpg once, but if you get past this, you'll be surprised with the comedy. I like to read and the situation with the characters are merging well. Btw Guidance is a fair name. It's far from the bunch of "God" or "GM" etc. It isn't much but that's great to me. Finally, you'll find yourself in front of a first-person narrated story. That refreshing! It's much easier to relate to the troubles Moriya casualy talks about. Modern problems(/interests) require modern solutions. Also I don't know if the cover of the novel has especially been done for it, but oh boy does it fit well. Great work so far.
This is a must read. The writing was captivating. It's pleasantly different from what we are used to. I think it's great. Keep it up author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ok, I am just genuinely impressed with the writing quality here. As an English major, I've been stuck reviewing so many books that have such a trash writing quality that I literally wanted to rip my hair out, but guess what? This book is literally perfect in the sense that it has no spelling or grammar mistakes at all, truly impressive. Now, off of that topic, the story development and character design are good so far, but not anything too special and the world is somewhat the same as some other novels, so I'm waiting to see if there will be some uniqueness that the writer can come up with. Overall, a good read that I would casually recommend.
Only the first few chapters have been published at the time of this review so it might be too early to make strong statements, however I do have to admit that this novel is a pretty good read. It flows so smoothly which is done by the writing style of the author in which they manage to grasp your attention quickly and hold onto that until the very last sentence. I was surprised to see how quickly I read just the first chapter as with every word I read, I wanted to learn more and more. Definitely would recommend to anyone and everyone!