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The Upgrade system

[Ding! Congratulations on obtaining the upgrade system!] A year later... Umm... system, can I take back that upgrade? [NO!] Well then lets hope that no one finds out that I was the one who upgraded the world or else, they are all going to come after me. Hello, This is my first time writing a web novel. I know that there are a lot of things that I could improve on so any constructive criticism will be welcomed. I will read your comments and try to improve my writing. Thank you in advance for reading this novel or at least the synopsis. 200 Power Stones = 1 extra chapter 400 Power Stones = 2 extra chapters There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.

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Talking a lot

Sofia whispered back, "Should we tell him?"

"I think we should. He will probably figure it out in a while anyway."

"What are you guys whispering about?"

Sofia answered, "We were wondering if you came to the forest to kill the mutated animals to get exp."

"You guys know? Do you guys have the system as well?"

"Yes."

"Your bodyguard too?"

"Yes, and he got it long before us."

"What level is he in?"

"I don't know his actual level but he said that he is above level 5 and at the very least, he is above level 2 because I still can't tell what his level is."

"The two of you do know that I have ears right?"

Coughing a little, Max replies, "Of course, of course."

Dan asked, "How did you manage to kill the mutated animals by yourself?"

Max pointed to his rifle and replied, "I used to be in the army and my shotting skills weren't too bad."

"Are you two going to continue hunting?"

"No, we are going back. I have to work at the company."

"Ok, I was about to head back too, how about we go back together."

Sofia said, "I am fine with that."

As they went back, Dan asked max a lot of questions and managed to get a fair bit of information about him.

"What do you do?"

"I manage a real estate company. I think you already met my son, Issac when we were in the meeting."

"Yes, he seemed like a nice person."

"I tried to make sure that he wasn't too spoiled."

"Oh, that's great. How did you do that?"

"Well, unlike most rich kids, I made sure to not give him things worth too much when he was still young."

"After he got a bit older, I gave him allowances for doing good things but I also made sure that after that point on, he would have to buy most of the things that he wanted with his own money."

"One time when he was about 13 years old, he wanted certain brand clothes but he didn't have enough money for it so he asked me if I could buy it for him."

Sorry guys, I have been busy so I wasn't able to upload a chapter on time today.

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