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[Ding! Congratulations on obtaining the upgrade system!] A year later... Umm... system, can I take back that upgrade? [NO!] Well then lets hope that no one finds out that I was the one who upgraded the world or else, they are all going to come after me. Hello, This is my first time writing a web novel. I know that there are a lot of things that I could improve on so any constructive criticism will be welcomed. I will read your comments and try to improve my writing. Thank you in advance for reading this novel or at least the synopsis. 200 Power Stones = 1 extra chapter 400 Power Stones = 2 extra chapters There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.
Under the evening sun, the street seemed to have great charm. Dan was with his girlfriend Lily who had been going out with him for 6 years.
"Let's break up," Lily said.
"Stop joking, it's not funny."
"I am not joking, I know you like me a lot and do a lot of things for me but you are just a normal person while my family is worth hundreds of millions of dollars. I hope that you can find someone who you can find someone to be with."
As she turned around, Dan thought he saw what seemed to be a tear but he dismissed it believing it to be his imagination.
He sighed, "A person who can give up a love of six years so easily for money, there's no way she can cry after breaking up."
As he watched her get on a car and leave he thought to himself, one day I will be rich.
With that resolution, he started to walk home.
As he was walking home, 5 black cars stopped near Dan and got out. There were 10 men who looked to be about 30 years old, they all had tattoos of a tiger on their shoulder. Some of them were carrying bats while others didn't have any weapons on them.
The man in the lead looked at Dan and started to laugh like crazy saying, "Hahhahhah, Just beating a weak person like you can get me about $25,000."
With that, he signaled his men to attack Dan, Dan knew that there was nowhere to run so he tried to punch one of the guys but his hand was caught and he used his other hand to punch Dan's stomach.
Well, what did you expect from a guy who never fought before?
After a while, Dan was completely beaten up and the leader of the men said, "Remember Lily is young master Harry's fiancee, if you get close to her every again you won't just end up getting beat up."
With that, the gangsters drove away.
As Dan was about to get up he heard a voice.
[Ding! Congratulations on obtaining the upgrade system!]
