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The Upgrade system

[Ding! Congratulations on obtaining the upgrade system!] A year later... Umm... system, can I take back that upgrade? [NO!] Well then lets hope that no one finds out that I was the one who upgraded the world or else, they are all going to come after me. Hello, This is my first time writing a web novel. I know that there are a lot of things that I could improve on so any constructive criticism will be welcomed. I will read your comments and try to improve my writing. Thank you in advance for reading this novel or at least the synopsis. 200 Power Stones = 1 extra chapter 400 Power Stones = 2 extra chapters There has been a new discord server made for the novel. In there you can give me feedback and suggestions for the novel. You will also be able to help me choose which novel cover I should use and make suggestions for the cover.

Dominion_Sage · Urban
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Max

Dan had managed to hurt all of the bear's legs so that it couldn't move and so Sofia could kill the bear without worrying about the bear attacking her.

After Sofia killed the bear, she got a notification.

{Congrulations for your first kill}

{For your first kill, you will receive an extra 10 UP points}

{For killing the mutated bear, you get +5 exp and +0.1 UP points}

Dan did the same for 3 more mutated creatures.

After that, Dan decided to only injure the animal's legs a little bit so that the mutated animals could only still move but a little bit slower and she killed 5 more animals like that.

Sofia reached level 2 after killing 5 more animals without any help from Dan.

{Congrulations for leveling up}

{Name: Sofia}

{Level: 2}

->{Qi Gathering Stage 2}

{HP: 25/100}

{Exp: 0/200}

{UP points: 35}

{Strength: 13 +3 (Braclet) = 16 }

{Stamina: 13}

{Agility: 13 + 1 (Braclet) = 16}

{Defense: 4 (Braclet)}

'Well ok, so she managed to get +3 in all of her attributes which is lower than mine when I became level 2 but she got more HP than me.'

'If I were to compare just the tow of our attributes, mine doesn't seem to be average but I will need to know the attributes of more people to be sure.'

It was time to go to the office so Dan and Sofia started to get out of the forest, they met Mr. Max who was one of the people Dan had added to the system.

"Oh, Sofia. Why are you in the forest?"

"No reason, I am just here to get some fresh air. What about you Mr. Max?"

"I am the same but I have heard that there are some mutated animals in the forests so you should be careful."

"Of course, you should be careful too."

As they were talking, Dan sensed that Mr. Max had also gotten to level 2.

The only reason that Sofia nor Max had realized that both of them were cultivators was because of the fact that they hadn't tried to sense the other person thinking that they were just regular people.

Dan whispered to Sofia, "Mr. Max seems to be a level 2 cultivator as well. He probably came to the forest to kill the mutated animals to level up."