Hi there. I would like to promote this novel to you guys because the plot of this novel really touches your heart... Especially the sad and heart broken parts... Of course, this book have plenty of grammar error.. So, if you guys have OCD towards grammar then I will not recommend this novel to you... For me, I really enjoyed reading this novel so far although there are some grammar mistakes here and there... But overall, the author did a great job...
I love the idea of the story (the unloved wife of the ML). But if the story was polished it would flow and sound so much better. There are grammar issues which effect the feel of the story. As well as the pace of the writing. I hate to leave a review like this. With a few changes and a good editor, the writing quality would improve the story and background development.
I only read to chapter 4 but couldn't continue. English translation is of lower quality so it interfered in the reading experience for me. Also, don't know if it was because of the translation, but the story was kind of rambling. I started reading because of the plot description but the writing just didn't suit me.
I enjoyed reading it. I’m not sure about the updates because I read it all in a night. The only problem I have is I think the male lead should apologize better for all the crap he put her through before the marriage. I would also think the female should be more cautious and disbelieving of his sudden change. Other then that there are no other problems I can think of.
the idea of this novel is good, but im sorry that i will stop reading this for now. its too confusing. in some chapters, the stories are not match from one to another. to many word to describe a character/situation over and over again for the same issue that scattered in many chapters. but if you want to read it for fun and wont give much tough for the consistency of the story, then this is good for you.
Well I don't know what i will write for review.😑 I just liked the story so far. I still reading until chapter 26 when I write this review. I like when he still in coma, but when he wake up and back home, i somewhat cringy with they lovey dovey interaction. It too fast maybe?🤔 I don't know. Because i'm not romantic person. I'm sometimes feel cringy when look or read lovey dovey interaction between couple. Well but i still read it though.
I like the description anyway.. Probably cause when an editor have the urge to write a book but have no idea fully.. It ends up like that so I get you. What I don't get is that some sentences don't blend with the rest of the paragraph. Please when you have the chance correct that. Other than that the story is interesting and interesting so far.
I'm really sorry to give you this honest review, but the MC character is too weak and soft to my liking, the male lead isn't that good either, at the beginning the story said that even though the unloved wife is really good and kind, the ML still doesn't love her, but in the middle of story we know it doesn't true? the MC suddenly love this ML without any reason even though when the ML character in the novel is a cruel cheater, too many inconsistencies in this story that supposed to be mistery but rather than make me more curious, it makes me feel there's too many plot hole, i could see that the author have talent to be a writer but maybe this is not my cup of tea, i think I'll drop this one, Thank you for creating this novel, i hope i could read your better creation in the future ❤️