Review Detail of Lea_Davis in The Tyrant Gentle Husband
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This is for through chapter 15. Maybe it gets better later but with the writing and holes I could not read more. This is too bad since the plot sounded interesting. (I had to read a review to figure out what the story was about since the summary didn’t explain much of anything.) The writing was difficult to follow in parts. There are many problems with grammar which does improves a slightly as it goes on. Often times a sentence will just rephrase what the sentence prior to it said. Often the story contradicts itself. Examples ~ mc is sick and unable to wake for 3 days but the maid confused how mc forgot her husband is in a coma for ALMOST three days. ~ in ML’s POV mc has been taking care of him for quite some time already and later she apologizes for being gone because she was sick ~ it’s said repeatedly mc doesn’t like to be a leader and the original Elena wanted a normal life. However, she manages and owns many successful restaurants and businesses. She is even the secretive CEO of the top entertainment industry called Frost Entertainment, that she started herself. ~ before coma, ML never looked at MC, avoided her, and even turns around the moment their paths cross. He calls her ugly then turns around and claims she is beautiful and lamenting over never seeing her beautiful smile & ect again even though they had basically no interaction before he is in a coma. Thing I just didn’t like ML instantly recognizes how he wronged MC and loves her completely. It went from “She is ugly and only after my money to “she is gorgeous, gentle, and kind” in just paragraphs apart. Also he suddenly sees all the shortcomings and “evilness” of the lady her was madly and irrational in love with that he was going to leave MC for.
The Tyrant Gentle Husband
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there is even more bullsh*t after that. You remembered hhd as missing that moons girl, right? he was calling elena ugly and only miona was in his mind. later after they were together, he always claimed that him falling in love with miona was a rumour, like wtf!! why was he remembering miona and waited for her when he never loved her? and even if he loved her then why he completely forgot that he was once an admirer of that girl? and fl never had any good relationship with her family except for her younger twins. and she always mentioned how cold and distant her older brothers and parents were to her. but when they were introduced, they suddenly became protective brothers of fl and even fl lives them. she once said that she doesn't care about anyone other than twins in her family, then suddenly became close to her older siblings....wth!! and there are ml's friends, laxus, Alex and doctor guy. They were in one chapter claiming that they were best friends so how could they didn't knew about ml's marriage, then after some chapters when laxus and ml were conversing at phone there was an internal monologue about how ml isn't close with laxus and alex. like dude, atleast stick to one point!!how can author change their relationship whenever he/she likes? there are just to many plot holes and badl writing