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Sugakookie_3

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I enjoy books, craft-making, and gardening.

2018-09-05 JoinedUnited States
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_31mth
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    Ch 2 Luo Xiaoman
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    The Mighty Little Sorceress
    Fantasy Romance · Luo Ziyun
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_32mth
    Commented

    Is Avril going to be the lady from the beginning of the story? (I can't remember if her name was already said.)

    Ch 19 Grand Canyon
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    Super Gene Optimization Fluid
    Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_32mth
    Commented

    So, it's no longer Fur2?

    3. Fur (133% talent)
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    Super Pet Nursery
    Fantasy · RoadBlock92
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_32mth
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    I like how this chapter ended. The contrast between Arthur trying to keep to his principles while the people around him start to stray from theirs.

    Every person he met was unique in their way. He was making friends for the first time in years, and he couldn't help but smile as he remembered Yuran's kind face. He wondered what he was doing now.
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    Level Up Legacy
    Fantasy · MellowGuy
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_33mth
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    I love the idea of the story (the unloved wife of the ML). But if the story was polished it would flow and sound so much better. There are grammar issues which effect the feel of the story. As well as the pace of the writing. I hate to leave a review like this. With a few changes and a good editor, the writing quality would improve the story and background development.

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    The Tyrant Gentle Husband
    Contemporary Romance · Hana_Frederica
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_33mth
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    In a previous chapter, he said he couldn't remember if the siblings were rescued.🤔

    In his past life, Ling Fei was killed by the kidnappers, as she had not received Lu Xuan's help.
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    This Earth Is A Bit Fearsome
    Eastern Fantasy · Fu Xiaochen
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_33mth
    Posted

    I enjoyed the synopsis, so I decided to read the novel. I am disappointed. If this isn't a MTL than the writing needs to be improved. If it is a MTL like another review stated then it NEEDS an editor. There are too many previously deleted chapters that still appear ruining the reading flow if a reader does not pay attention. It's a pity because this has the potential to be a great story if it was cleaned up.

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    My Mr. Song is extremely protective!
    Contemporary Romance · The snow of an iceberg
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_33mth
    Commented

    Did the author change their mind about deleting ch 18 or did I misunderstand? Ch 18 is similar to the first half of ch 19. did he eat her apple 2 days in a row?

    Ch 19 Chapter 19, warmth
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    My Mr. Song is extremely protective!
    Contemporary Romance · The snow of an iceberg
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_34mth
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    I don't know whether to be happy or disappointed at his way of thinking.🤔

    There was no lover or girlfriend in his vocabulary, only wife. If they decided to enter a relationship with him then they are stuck with him for life. Sorry ladies, but there's no backing out after boarding the pirate ship.
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    Prime Originator
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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  • Sugakookie_3
    Sugakookie_34mth
    Commented

    Sounds good, I like the story and pace.

    Ch 4 Saving the Damsel in Distress
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    Fantasy · Pointbreak
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