I like the description anyway.. Probably cause when an editor have the urge to write a book but have no idea fully.. It ends up like that so I get you. What I don't get is that some sentences don't blend with the rest of the paragraph. Please when you have the chance correct that. Other than that the story is interesting and interesting so far.
Hana_Frederica
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