Reviews of The Two Lives Of Aaron Wade: The Gamer & The Heir

The story is exquisite, adding in more detail over time while making large changes at the drop of a hat. It is a extremely fast pace book where the characters ter could experience a roller coaster of highs and lows within the same chapter while keeping a steady flow keeping the story on the proper path. It is an adventure for the maniacal as well as the romantic. Though just a warning it can get gruesome quite often.

Having read a sample of chapters, it's safe to conclude that this story tries too hard to do too many things at the same time. Here's some of the gamut of tropes that the author tried to squeeze into his story: 1. Having an unknown love child 2. Conveniently having said love child's mother dead 3. Having a new "stepmother" for said love child. 4. Introducing vr elements as a major component of the story 5. Introducing corporate politics. 6. Introducing crime/mafia elements into this story. 7. Trying to include humorous elements. I could go on and on. My advice for the author is that while it's great that you're inspired by various ideas, it's more important for a newbie ******* writer to write his first story with as small a scope as possible. Frankly, even bestselling authors like Butcher will struggle and fail at incorporating all the elements in this story. I mean VR plus corporate politics plus crime/mafia? This could be three standalone novels rather than just one. This is without mentioning the terrible prose/dialogue and cardboard characters. I see that the author has written about 200 chapters of this dross. My advice is to take this current story as a learning project and start over with a brand new idea.

all of this author's works are super good and underrated. need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters need 140 characters

Wow I’m only on Chapter 4 but this doesn’t read like one of those crappy originals at all! World building is great characters are interesting and there are tons of mysteries wherever you look. So excited for this one!

First of, great imagination and blend of soo much. But the problem is that the the VRMO actually feels like a drag instead of interesting. It feels pretty forced and boring. Amazing ideas, hats off for that . Also for some reason the whole world seems very forced and artificial. I think that is because you tried too many things and don’t have experience in properly connecting all of it. The flow is kinda missing like how it was done in ROTWRTW(not on webnovel)

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Interesting read my friend yessireee very glad to have discovered this little treasire💎 its hot everything one would want in a great novel an interesting storyline, great characters that you love to hate and hate to love😘..........😲😲😲 an entertaining read overall🤨okaayyyeee dokie...sooo yep.....plz keep updating plz, i will read okkkkkk🤞😇

Yahhhh wahoo hot hot hot 🔥🔥🔥 on fire yeah...excited to read this!!!! Vote vote vote gifts gifts gift lol!!!!! Pleease update the novel fast at least one chap a day😢😁😢😁 okay❓❓⁉️❗⁉️❗here your reward 🎁🎁🎁 😋😋😉

I am so very much finding myself liking the story just on the summary and reading other readers reviews just by itself so I felt I must review it too😝😝😝😝 I am liking the story so far😍😍😍😍 So keep the chapters updated daily please!!!🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼 Its going to be one of my top novels I'm sure!!😜😜😜 LOVE it for now 💕❤️💕 💕 soooooooo more!!!!! Okay! Great❤️❤️❤️❤️

Is a nice story but up to chapter 25 i feel like all is in game rewards are too big for his efforts , his real life parts are nice so far

Wtf... You can be BATMAN yet you choose became gamer, really? Nah just joking. Not read yet but the theme sound generic, but hey who knew maybe this one can be good.

Very good once you get past the first chapters that seem just like some overpowered cheat, there is much more to this novel than one might think.

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Great story, just not my cup of tea. I don't see a reason not to give this a try, as I'm sure most people would probably enjoy it. I only read a dozen chapters, so take this with a grain of salt, but so far, the writing quality and characters seem pretty good. It's original and can be a breath of fresh air depending on your reading choices.

So far so good. I’m already in love with his other work. Love that he’s fearless and his grandpa is a badass. Also love the African heritage that the author includes in there. Plus foreshadowing..... A1

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So im 50 chapters in and this is hones so so good! I have spent the better part of 2019 reading so many novels here on wn! And i can say this is one of the good ones!

Interesting story, I like the way the main character is handling his two personas. Les see how he manage all the trouble coming his way... 😎😎👍👍👍

Good another video game novel was looking for one to read that’s entertaining and I’m hope I’ll turn out to like this story. I like the summary and reviews for this story at least. Can’t wait to read this novel and be hooked, lol💆🏻‍♀️Wahoo!!!